XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skater Punk]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i liked it for the humor portion of it, but as for the "ART" like teh character it could be abit better aswll as backrounds and stuff, but i did laugh with it, lots of funny happenings going on...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and effort on the characters and backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute, needs more effort in some areas though...

~X~

[Yoshi's Island X]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i liked this, also liked the sharp sprites even backrounds looked really nice, the "CURSUR" was no needed it seemed to get in the way at times, but overall it was a neat sharp looking sprite flash, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove the "GLOVE" Cursur as its not needed...

~~OVERALL~~
Sharp sprite animation and yoshi is always funny...

~X~

[game nonsense]

((( NEAT IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, the idea of the micture of differrent elemens, the "ART" was notbad either, and most of all it made me laugh so it has a good entertainment value, i did think the file was abit much at 3 megs though, but overall i enjoyd it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just lower the filesize somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining with some decent humor and artwork, could be compressed abit better though...

~X~

[1vs1 stick fight]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was interesting, i thought the "BLEEDING EYES" wa a nice touch, but overall this was a neat little animation but does need some sorta effort from the backrounds to the character art...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and effort is needed...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more to it...

~X~

[Robust & Dog]

((( NEAT STYLE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta neat with the whole "B&W" theme, and the characters were neat, i do think it needs some work on more detail like in the backrounds and more effects, also abit of color would spice up things...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation to the characters, I noticed the text was abit sloppy, why not give it some detail aswell as some Text bubbles, a decent font with some deep colors and good text bubles should improve on this... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat little flash but could use some improving...

~X~

Extar responds:

Glad you enjoyed the flash and thanks for the review!
Having black and white, then adding some bits of colour like for blood is too corny, I'm not going to start ripping off Sin City wholesale. Also, text bubbles would totally spoil the style of the flash, I was aiming for something subtle and not brash, even if readability and such would suffer.
You actually wanted more text? Most people get a headache when I ask them to read instead of me shouting the story at them through voices.
I'm not entirely sure what you thought was wrong with the font, too large/small or just not visible enough?
I will agree with you that there wasn't much detail in the backgrounds. However, I thought really detailed backgrounds would just be distracting and could mean the characters could have been lost with it being in black and white.
The criticisms you mention are the exact limitations I imposed on myself to actually make the flash unique and not like every other flash on NG, if I compromised them the flash would lose any individuality it might have.

[RR-What not to do @ Clubs]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute but needs more, it was very short only a few scenes and just a character or two, but i did get a little laugh out of it, add more to it especialy more backrounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this it was too short... Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute but too short of a flash...

~X~

[Fickle]

((( I LIKE THIS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i love the backround and then the doodling in other areas it was very neat and love the flow of the story and animation, it was cute and entertaining so nice animation, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more color like reds and blues and greens...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute animation somewhat artistic, but most of all funny stuff...

~X~

[Halo short : starwars]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining, and gave me a few laughs here and there, the mixture of starwars and halo was interesting, the whole button cliking for the text was abit anoying though... but overall it was funny and amusining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed the text was abit sloppy, why not give it some detail aswell as some Text bubbles, a decent font with some deep colors and good text bubles should improve on this... Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny mix of parodies but it will give you a good laugh, anyways nice job on this short...

~X~

fish-orb responds:

lol thanks for the review i no alot is to be impproved but the movie only took me 3 hours to make just as a short parody XD