XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute but needs more, it was very short only a few scenes and just a character or two, but i did get a little laugh out of it, add more to it especialy more backrounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to this it was too short... Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute but too short of a flash...

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[Fickle]

((( I LIKE THIS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i love the backround and then the doodling in other areas it was very neat and love the flow of the story and animation, it was cute and entertaining so nice animation, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more color like reds and blues and greens...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute animation somewhat artistic, but most of all funny stuff...

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[Halo short : starwars]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining, and gave me a few laughs here and there, the mixture of starwars and halo was interesting, the whole button cliking for the text was abit anoying though... but overall it was funny and amusining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed the text was abit sloppy, why not give it some detail aswell as some Text bubbles, a decent font with some deep colors and good text bubles should improve on this... Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny mix of parodies but it will give you a good laugh, anyways nice job on this short...

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fish-orb responds:

lol thanks for the review i no alot is to be impproved but the movie only took me 3 hours to make just as a short parody XD

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((( NICE SOUND/FX )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had a fresh look to it like the characters face, but most of all it had some very sharp "SOUND/FX" i would say add some backrounds as the white ones are very bland, anyways nice animation keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides just a white one...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny killing flash, but atleast its not sticks lol...

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[Where Nightmares Are Made]

((( NICE ART )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, i think what i like dmost about this was the "ARTWORK" very detailed and nice use of colors, as for the flash animation abit slow but i think thats what you wanted, anyways nice animation keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be abit longer with some sorta dialog...

~~OVERALL~~
A slow animation but neat artwork...

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[Beowulf Redux]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining the dragon was kinda neat, i was not too happy with the file size of it all but you did present a nifty little story flash, i enjoyed it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compresion is a start...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and neat idea...

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[Warpigs 18: Extra Ranch]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well it did make me laugh, and the flashing effect was not my fave but seemed to do the trick in making this more funny, maybe lower the filesize somewhat though, if there are others ill have to check them out,...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression and some new humor styles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny, but could be abit more funnier...

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[Matt World Gouge Special]

((( NOTBAD BUT COULD BE LONGER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad but was really too short in my opinion, it either needed more to it or part ofa number of short clips, or something, as for the animation it was decent artwork and animating was ok but still very little animation to really go on anything...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add much more content, aswell as blood effects of how a real eye would pop out and such...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining but way too short...

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