XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GG - 11/25: InhalerGlock2]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i like the different clips, and some ok art but clearly could be improved with some detail aspects and much more effort, needs more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort and detail all around...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but lacks effort and detail...

~X~

[Breakfast In Bed]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad for your first animation, but you should compress it as much as you can especialy for your first animation, there was alot of shaking going on which was notbad but could be much smoother with more time, as for the art it was ok could use more details though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A first time flash, notbad but could be better...

~X~

[Phantom Of The Sticks]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, it was entertaining, allthough you should think about something more then just sticks, something with more character feel to them, anyways nice stick animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining stick flash, could use more to the characters and the backrounds though...

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[END OF DAYz II EXTENDED]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, but could be somewhat better, like with the animation, it was off and on at times, nice art detail and interesting theme, also the file was abit much, lower it abit...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the huge file...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash, but could use some compression...

~X~

[Pat Fitzstephens Tribute]

((( NICE EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, and i noticed some really nice effcts, and color use, made the animation more worth while, and there was 4 good clips not crapy ones so very nice on this, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add another clip or two...

~~OVERALL~~
Good quality colab clips with some funny random scenes and good effects aswell...

~X~

[Final Fantasy Matters]

((( VERY NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was some nice work, great animation, and the "CHARACTERS" were very impressive lots of effort and detail, and the story really stood out, i was impressed from start to finish...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as it was perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat story, nice effects and cool characters, nice job...

~X~

[CounterStrike>WarFeaver]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cool, i like how it all flowd together, i do think it needs some better effort on the detail and effects side, also most important in any flash is the "COMPRESSION" it needs it badly, but for the most part it was interesting...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting animation but needs some compression...

~X~

[Global Warming Project]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, it does have alot of good facts and then some but doesnt give all the sources to date such as other means of things that could happen, but anyways it was neat i like dit...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as it was ok...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash could have more true facts aswell...

~X~