XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peoplace 2]

((( INTERESTING FLASH HERE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting, the black and white was neat, and even the "TEXT" was a nice touch, the text was actually hard to read as it matched the backround abit, the animation itself actually moved abit slow, try and speed it up abit, anyways nice animation, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the animation just abit... It was hard to read the text as it was a simular color to backround colors or just really light, what you could do is add a black bar behind the text so it is easier to read... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
Good b/w flash but could use abit more to it, overall i liked it...

~X~

[Starwell ep11: Molested?]

((( GREAT LOOKING CHARACTERS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was really good, i have seen a few of these now and ll are awsome in detail and characters, but for this animation, i think it needs some subtitles allthough the voices were really good, anyways keep making these awsome episodes...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Voices were not bad Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
Great animation and characters, could use some subtitles though, anyways great episode i look forward to more...

~X~

[Mday - clones]

((( STRANGE BUT ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was strange but i found it to be very entertaining i liked all the strange randomness and odd characters, it got abit confusing at times but was funny most of the time, so notba don this odd animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More odd characters would be interesting...

~~OVERALL~~
A strange flash but amusing and very entertaining, nice animation...

~X~

[@@@@@@@@FAGGOT@@@@@@@@@@@]

((( LOL CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, especialy the end, but i would suggest adding more to it, say like adding more scenes, and most of all some color, also it was abit hard to understand the voices, it made me laugh though so nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, some backrounds or a backround color base, and some more content all around...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny short and amusing, you all should get a good laugh out of this one...

~X~

[Daily2oon SE: Breadfruit]

((( IM IMPRESSED )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow they seem to get better with age, i was really impressed with this one, the art with the characters was really welldone, and really good backrounds mixed with neat effects and animationg, love the characters though, very good work on this one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more like this...

~~OVERALL~~
The best of the D2 series...

~X~

[Chinese Buffet]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i really like the animation it seemed to really flow along, and i also love the buildings while he was driving it really looked like he was in this other world that you created, anyways nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add abit more to it, more characters aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Good animation, neat artworks, and funny story...

~X~

[COOLWEED]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
WEll it was amusining i will give that much, i does need more to it, say like if you wanted to go all random, you could add all sorts of colors in the backrounds and suchm maybe add more trees, but mainly this needs some better backrounds besides the bland white one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content such as i stated above, more effort is needed...

~~OVERALL~~
Abit bland but will give you a good laugh...

~X~

[Utopia]

((( AWSOME )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow im suprised i didnt see this before, it was very impressive, i love the character design very robot like, but it was very good, this flash even won some awards which was well deserved as it had some intense art and great detail lov ethe effort you put into this, glad i saw it, so nice job indeed, hope to see much more of your work sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more characters like that main one he is awsome...

~~OVERALL~~
Great animation very cool character and nice effects aswell, congrats on making an awsome flash...

~X~

Vuny responds:

We'll find out in the next one, "Utopia 2".