XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tony 3]

((( ABIT SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny character this tony is and he seems to like shooting everything in sight heh, , the character was neat, could use more animation to him though, and the "SOUND/FX" was abit low quality had some scratchy sounds to it, anyways funny short, hope to see longer ones in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer or add a few together, and get better sound/fx...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny short with a guy names tony and a gun lol...

~X~

[Pimp My Ride Intro: AE]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat kinda neat, the cars look really good, i do think it was too short maybe add a few more cars or something, and some nice designs, maybe also add some sorta borders, but for the most part it is entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more cars and make it abit longer...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat intro, could be longer though...

~X~

[Mario Dark Vengeance Eps1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, i like mario themed stuff, and as your first flash it was not bad, there could be more action and more effects in action scenes aswell, but for the mostpart it was neat, i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the filesize somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun mario flash, decent action...

~X~

[Los Angeles is Burning]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea with the whole burning idea, and i must say the song was very impressive, this title caught my attention though i live in so calif and therew as recently fires heh anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should make more to this, You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea, great music and decent animation...

~X~

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Thanks.

[Circles Versus Triangles]

((( HAHA CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, the weapons were neat, and the music seemed to fit aswell, the shapes were really basic though, but all n all it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and shading in the props like weapons and shapes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amuing, abit basic though...

~X~

swordsman21 responds:

I was going for something basic, to help me get a feel for flash, plus I thought simplicity would make for an easy to understand concept. If I make more of these in the future, which I hope to because CVT is pretty close to my heart, the weapons and animation will get better and more detailed, but the combatants will always be simple shapes, becuase I love it.

[MDay : 30 Minutes]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me laugh and there was a few different things in this which was neat, the "TURTLES" were funny as hell, my fave by far, you should lower the filesize somewhow though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compression...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animations, turtles are funny...

~X~

[Rivercity Ransom: Ep.1Nam]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, i did think the "WINDOW SCREEN" was abit small, you did have some good action aswella s the "SOUND/FX" but you should have had some audio for the voices to go along with the text bubbles, anyways good animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff... and make the window size abit larger...

~~OVERALL~~
Good sprite battle action and funny....

~X~

[guard I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting kinda cute actually, the "AUDIO" seemed to get abit anoying after abit, but i was impressed how it all animated together kinda neat, hope to see more work from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the "WINDOW" larger it seemed abit small...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and interesting but entertaining, so notbad...

~X~

Ooli responds:

thanks for the review. I made the music stopable and will keep the others comments in mind for the part 2.