XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Los Angeles is Burning]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea with the whole burning idea, and i must say the song was very impressive, this title caught my attention though i live in so calif and therew as recently fires heh anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should make more to this, You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea, great music and decent animation...

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Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Thanks.

[Circles Versus Triangles]

((( HAHA CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, the weapons were neat, and the music seemed to fit aswell, the shapes were really basic though, but all n all it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and shading in the props like weapons and shapes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amuing, abit basic though...

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swordsman21 responds:

I was going for something basic, to help me get a feel for flash, plus I thought simplicity would make for an easy to understand concept. If I make more of these in the future, which I hope to because CVT is pretty close to my heart, the weapons and animation will get better and more detailed, but the combatants will always be simple shapes, becuase I love it.

[MDay : 30 Minutes]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me laugh and there was a few different things in this which was neat, the "TURTLES" were funny as hell, my fave by far, you should lower the filesize somewhow though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compression...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animations, turtles are funny...

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[Rivercity Ransom: Ep.1Nam]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, i did think the "WINDOW SCREEN" was abit small, you did have some good action aswella s the "SOUND/FX" but you should have had some audio for the voices to go along with the text bubbles, anyways good animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff... and make the window size abit larger...

~~OVERALL~~
Good sprite battle action and funny....

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[guard I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting kinda cute actually, the "AUDIO" seemed to get abit anoying after abit, but i was impressed how it all animated together kinda neat, hope to see more work from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the "WINDOW" larger it seemed abit small...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and interesting but entertaining, so notbad...

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Ooli responds:

thanks for the review. I made the music stopable and will keep the others comments in mind for the part 2.

[GG - 11/25: InhalerGlock2]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i like the different clips, and some ok art but clearly could be improved with some detail aspects and much more effort, needs more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort and detail all around...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but lacks effort and detail...

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[Breakfast In Bed]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad for your first animation, but you should compress it as much as you can especialy for your first animation, there was alot of shaking going on which was notbad but could be much smoother with more time, as for the art it was ok could use more details though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A first time flash, notbad but could be better...

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