XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ebay Song]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but could be better, i mean there was lots of "JPEGS" some sloppy ones at that, and a very plain white backround, maybe some mixture of toons and jpegs or something that could make it abit better then what it is, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better graphics, Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland...

~~OVERALL~~
Random and entertaining...

[The Elite Koopas 2]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh, seemed to run abit slow, maybe just speed up the animation abit more but funny and very oldschool mario hehe, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, and better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny humor oldschool sprites...

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[the vegetablegarden 3]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, kinda neat actually, i like that you used some good color, and the flash was neat it was entertaining, could use abit more detail and effort in that area but other then that it was a decent flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and flashy effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash, needs some compressing and more effects...

~X~

[Zelda: Heroic Rage 7]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i gave all tens because it had some great animation to it aswell as some good humor to it, This was very impressive from start to finish, entertaining, this one had a better plot then the last i saw, and as always they present great graphics from the characters to the backrounds aswell as some awsome effects, very nice work indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just work on the size somewhat, and make more episodes soon...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny good animating and very entertaining, nice work indeed...

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[E1:Rocket Man]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining and had some good story to it that was funny, also some nice voices if i should say so myself, but i think some subtitles would improve on this, anyways decent animation, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent toon, good characters and some ok humor....

~X~

[Magus Bros Shorts 2]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Takes me back to my old mario playing days, but anyways it was funny with the convo between the two, the text bubbles coud be abit larger though hard to read so little, maybe some voice-overs would help on this...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A good gjost house mario themed flash...

~X~

ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

Well I'm somewhat reluctant to put voices in this series to be honest. I'll increase the text size a bit for the next episode though. Thanks.

[Mario Battle 1]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad but it does need some work like little things, details here and there aswell as some flashy effects, also some compressing of the file would be great especialy since it was abit big, anyways better luck next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compression, some better detail, and flash effects all around...

~~OVERALL~~
Anok flash with some ok action but needs more effort and detail...

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[Hamlet the Musical 8a]

((( COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was awsome, and here i tought i reviewed them all, this was just another awsome vision on it, allthough that filesize is still massive and needs major cutting down, anyways great flash and legos, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cpmpress this big time...

~~OVERALL~~
Another in the series of a great lego-mation...

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[Wildfire Island]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, the characters and humor of it all was what i liked about it, made me laugh alot, anyways good smooth animation here, could be abit betteron the size, anyways notbad at all, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit lowering of the file...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice animation, good graphics, and humor...

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[Street SkateBoarding [BR]]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, actually its better then most "SKATE" Flashes since others were just stick based and b&w as for this you made a real character and had great use of color, and some neat backrounds, aswell as some neat tricks, so nice job, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stunts and maybe some other skaters in the backround...

~~OVERALL~~
A welldone skater flash with some good use of color...

~X~