XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gaming and YOU]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok could be better though, the "ANIMATION" seemed abit choppy maybe thats the idea, it was abit short aswell, but i did like the idea just needs to be presented abit better, also some subtitles depicking the story would be cool...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, longer scenes, and more humor...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short silent like flash, notbad but could be better...

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[An Alien's Bad Day]

((( NICE DETAIL )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, i especialy like the detail and really neat artwork from the character to props and the backrounds, as for the story it was simple and funny but just right i especialy like the ending hehe, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, maybe add a few more characters and such...

~~OVERALL~~
Simple short and really nice artwork...

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[Pop-Tarts]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny the animation was actually good, but the music didnt seem to fit to well, maybe something more pleasent, but anyways it was a simple idea but funny i liked it, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the music and add somethig more pleasent...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining animation but the music was abit off...

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[Blu Attac]

((( LOL WILD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was wild, the music was abit much though, maybe tone it down abit, but as for the clay flash it was neat with the hand and all, poor clay guy though, you should make more like this sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and less lighting, and add more clay...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny clay and neat action but tone down the music abit...

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[GG - 11/25: RoflMuffin]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL it was funny and besides the flashing it was actually some good artwork, but there was just abit much flashing and it needs to go into other scenes with much more content, it was entertaining though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes, more characters and less flashing...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but be warned this flash has lots of flashing...

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[Haunted]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it has promise but needs more to it and some fixing up such as fixing its looping issue, abit of color here and there wouldnt hurt either, but i think what it needs the most is some music and or sound/fx...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some music or sound/fx, and You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Needs a fix in the looping and some audio, but has a sorta good story...

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[Pokemon Xmas Song]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it did make me laugh, cute song, the jpegs was abit much, more use of your own flash designs might make it more original, but it was funny for the song, so notbad there...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of your own creations on characters and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A song pokemon and lots of humor...

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[Endless Dream: Episode 3]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow that was impressive, mostly the story and each episode really unfolds allthough i need to catch up on some of the other episodes, the size was way up there but well worth the wait time, anyways nice job, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More episodes for sure...

~~OVERALL~~
Large file but well worth the wait awsome story, cant be missed by anyone...

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[Bang That Drum All Day]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a music video of some sorts, the guy that starts off dancing was funny as were the other characters and may i say some decent drawn characters even the animation was good flowd well with the dancing music, my only issue would be to add some backrounds something that sets to the theme of the dancing and song...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny music video like animation with some dancing fools...

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[Mr.Mosquito]

((( CONFUSING BUT NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This animation had some nice graphics such as cool colors, and a good character aswell as a neat bug, but i didnt understand why the guy was all stranged out did he actually get hit cause it didnt look like he did? and the bug that was confusing at the end aswell anyways nice artwork just abit confusing...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer with a longer plot and story...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny short with a bug, some very nice artwork in this one...

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