XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Damn You, Mr. Ladyboy!!]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this made me laugh, it has some good art work and i like how you animated the mouths but nothing else, but i do think it was too short, you should add more and explain why he is yealling, nice graphics though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes and much more animating...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters but the animation is abit short...

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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Glad it made you chuckle.

This animated series is based on a series of short comics I drew whilst Mr. Ladyboy did his 168-hour comic. Basically, all the pictures remained the same (though I kept redrawing it, each time with different materials) and I just changed the text in the first two panels.

This is basically an extension of that - I'll keep it the same length, just experimenting with using different styles and changing the lines in the first two 'scenes'.

Really, if it made you chuckle, I consider it job done. This series won't get longer - it's like an exercise in working within constraints.

Thanks for the review!

[A Clown a Wall and a Ball]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining, i like the clown and all but he needs more of a body then just the head, but as for the flash it was entertaining made me chuckle abit so notbad at all, i would like to see more clown adventures...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more detail to the clown like a more visual body...

~~OVERALL~~
A clown with a silent file theme, kinda funny...

~X~

[Russian Snipers Hax REDUX]

((( HAHA CRAZY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was short and confusing but was funny as hell, the "VOICE" was strange and dint understand what was going on, but i must admit that it was funny and wacky...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and with more content...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and neat lttle flash here...

~X~

ampersandman responds:

:D

Thanks for the review.

Basically, in the scene, one of the russians held out a helmet to make it look like a viable target.

I made the voice of the sniper like a 12 year old's and his dialog reflects it when he starts complaining about the "server's registry sucking" in real life.

[Patrick get killed]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me chuckle there at the end, it was so fast though went by so fast like in a few seconds, so maybe add more to it and slow it down abit, have the characters have a sorta convo first before the impact, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
If you you like spongebob you will get a kick out of this...

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[Love on the Moon]

((( VERY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very short but i guess it was more for the poem or msg, i did like the graphics like of the moon and clouds in a circle, but you should improve on it by adding more content and more animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content and more animation, with more scenes besides just the one you had...

~~OVERALL~~
Very short but the romantic poem was nice...

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[night under karaoke]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, the songs or poems or whatever they were are funny, but i think the best part of all this was the, artwork very detailed and good character work, i was very impressed, anyways nice flash, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters and more scenes like an audiance...

~~OVERALL~~
Great detail, and strange song like poems, but overall a funny flash...

~X~

[Hey Imasu]

((( I LIKED THIS ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
I really liked this animation it was really good in the sense of characters and the animating of them, it also had a neat song that seemed to just fit right with the animation, very nice work indeed, i would like to see more sometime, but for now nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe have some voices for the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A very smooth animation and neat song...

~X~

[Love me Love me not]

((( THIS WAS CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, all the cats were well drawn and very cute, the file was big but notbad for the content so notbad, i really enjoyd it, i would like to see this turn into more then just this episode though, anyways nice job, keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more ctut stuff hehe...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent animation with some very cute cats and such...

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[Intro for something...]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kindof a test but whatever the cas ethe marching knights looked good, allthough you could speed up there animation somewhat abit better, and add more to it sometime, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, and more content is needed...

~~OVERALL~~
A good part of an animation needs smoother animation, but nice stuff sofar...

~X~