XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mars Attacks]

((( INTERESTING BUT COULD BE IMPROVED ON )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually very enetrtaining but could be improved on, like the "BUTTONS" remove those and let it flow, also have more animation and more characters, it was a neat idea for a story but needs more content...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more content, more characters and some refining of some of what you have...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea but needs more content...

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[Attack of Something!]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, the "ART" was interesting, the animation was decent, the on ething i thought was odd was why the "LARGE" screen size? but anyways you should make more of this and add more content like a "FULL" story...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smaller screen size would be a start, and some subtitles would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash abit short though...

~X~

[Billy's Rock Rampage]

((( THIS WAS INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well i must say that this was interesting, the funny animated character and his peach like skin was funny, there was some strange audio that i couldnt understand much, but it was entertaining, the flash did seem abit strange though, anyways nice job hope to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and strange all rolled into a short flash...

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DAIRYDOG responds:

Thanks, buddy.

[Richard, a portrait]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this made me laugh, but something i tell alot of authers would be to lower the filesize, this was bit but entertaining and i like the plot, could use improved art work though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better detail and graphics, but mostly could use some compressing...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat story will make you laugh abit, nice animation...

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[BB - Shorts Collab One]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha im laughing because of the title an interesting name chice you had there, but anyways this was a neat flash i did think the "MUSIC" was interesting not my taste but still interesting so nice work there aswell as an entertaining flash, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More music choices would be neat...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting flash almost liek a music video...

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[Bomberman: Unprovoked]

((( HAHA COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cool, i really liked it, i like it because the colors were really good and bright aswell making it very fresh looking, the animationw as decent had some funny moments, the onlything i didnt like about it was the whole large file which should be something to work on...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something i always tell large file authers Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and good use of color, neat character with some neat action throughout the flash, very entertaining...

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[Damn You, Mr. Ladyboy!!]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this made me laugh, it has some good art work and i like how you animated the mouths but nothing else, but i do think it was too short, you should add more and explain why he is yealling, nice graphics though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes and much more animating...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters but the animation is abit short...

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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Glad it made you chuckle.

This animated series is based on a series of short comics I drew whilst Mr. Ladyboy did his 168-hour comic. Basically, all the pictures remained the same (though I kept redrawing it, each time with different materials) and I just changed the text in the first two panels.

This is basically an extension of that - I'll keep it the same length, just experimenting with using different styles and changing the lines in the first two 'scenes'.

Really, if it made you chuckle, I consider it job done. This series won't get longer - it's like an exercise in working within constraints.

Thanks for the review!

[A Clown a Wall and a Ball]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining, i like the clown and all but he needs more of a body then just the head, but as for the flash it was entertaining made me chuckle abit so notbad at all, i would like to see more clown adventures...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more detail to the clown like a more visual body...

~~OVERALL~~
A clown with a silent file theme, kinda funny...

~X~