XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bin Laden Shape Craze]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was interesting kinda random, and seemed to lack backrounds, also abit short, and on top of that didnt have a replay button, so you may want to re-work this one out with a few upgrades...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some buttons, maybe a preloader, and add some backrounds besides the white one you had...

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing shape tweens, needs more then just that though, good luck...

~X~

[For Tamale]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well illadmit while it did give me abit of a laugh it was ok abit random though and seemed very short, maybe add abit more to it. it was funny though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content, add some new characters and maybe abit less random...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny clock flash from the old days...

~X~

[My Paper Airplane]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it could use some sound though, but was neat seeing it fly through all the buildings and stuff, you should also make it cause some chaos or something anyways it was amusing...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the plain cause chaos like hittint the cat or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flying plane...

~X~

[Movie Pitch]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, the characters were decent and the animation was actually funny, this could be in its own series, add more characters and you got somthing here, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more episodes and more characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters and god animation...

~X~

[Rainbow Illusion (FIXED)]

((( IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, very impressive, the 2 circle like rainbows were neat, you should add different styles though, anyways great stuff here, would love to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add new styles of rainbow...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat rainbow thingy...

~X~

[Johnny the Roctopus]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute abit simple and plain but funny, you should add more to it though such as more scenes some sorta plot and so on, but for the mostpart it was funny, and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes some sorta plot with other characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and simple...

~X~

[Roadrunner vs. Segway]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, very good animation, and really good graphics, you should make more of these like a whole bunce of mishaps or something anyways nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Animate his limbs abit better, like at all the joints...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny toon, made me laugh...

~X~

[CD06 - Zps Late.]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh, you should add a preloader and propper buttons as it seems to loop over and over, but it was entertaining especialy with the game music, anyways notbad but could use some work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs some work, You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random but entertaining...

~X~

ZombiePanda responds:

Sorry, it was just a quick throw in for the clock day time of year. I rather enjoyed making this short, and I know to do the Stop; command, but this was I believe my second flash, and didnt quite know how to do that kind of jazz quite yet.

Oh, and thank you for the review.