XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space]

Good dedication

Wow the word "SPACE" can send you into a strange moment haha, you really put some energy into this, love all the different scenes and art styles and love the vibrant colors, Dedication is key in all films or other works, and will make a good Victory you have Morphed some simple concepts and ideas into some more advanced options, So my Opening Remarks are just that, this is a good start.

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I honestly dont see the need for any changes this was solid.

~X~

[Pmation: "Pail Problems"]

Nice

I like the addition of the "PENCIL" and eraser really nice idea there, as my tip for this entry I might suggest some flashy effects on impact moments lighting and dark effects aswell, I love the flow of animation here and love all that you do with color and how fluid the animation goes from a to be, and you bring some nice little stories here and make them come alive with the very smooth animating skills so very nice work here, It's hard to offer a lot of critisism on this, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot I can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and I liked everything I saw here, Andlook forward to seeing more of this, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as my tip for this entry I might suggest some flashy effects on impact moments lighting and dark effects aswell

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #94]

I like it

A good episode as he "TALKS" about animation then boom his uncle apears very nice, I would suggest some subtitles just as an extra idea, So I like it, you have convinced me on a whole other level, and while some things can always be fixed and polished, its the humor that you really make work, sergio is simple but he always finds himself in these odd situations, and thats what I have come to love about these and this one, very good stuff, you should make the sister a main character, I know she is but she is always funny. My Ending Remarks on this flash submission, are that its a fine flash movie entry, there seems to be alot going on, and it does bring an entertaining value to the front tables, And I was Excitedly watching this film as it kept me interested, and glued to the screen, so nice strat to a good flash submission here, and I look forward to more of what you have for us. Not to bore youany longer I will try and bring this review to an end of sorts, But you do have a good Opportunity to make things better with the improvments if any, You have a Refreshing flash submission here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some subtitles just as an extra idea

~X~

[Flush the Wave]

Long loading

So for 1 meg it is still a long loading time not sure where you can optimise on that most of the time its the music, the flick was actually not half bad and had some interesting aspects about it the "MUSIC" was pretty cool and drives the film, anyways a nice little flick you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
long loading time not sure where you can optimise on that most of the time its the music,

~X~

[the killer bird]

Interesting

Well this was an interesting animation, the flow of "ANIMATION" was really slow and choppy, not sure if its something you can fix now since this is an older flick, but it is what it is, adding sound would be a huge plus for improved ideas for this one, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding sound would be a huge plus for improved ideas for this one

~X~

[Head in a Jar]

Cute animation

Haha well I have to say that this was a cute animation you have here the "GRAPHICS" was pretty good actually very good, the film itself was plain and simple but to the point, the "MUSIC" fit perfectly so all in all this was notbad but my tip for this one is that you could make it longer maybe the guys head rolls all over town under cars maybe a dog finds it etc, anyways nice work.

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my tip for this one is that you could make it longer maybe the guys head rolls all over town under cars maybe a dog finds it etc

~X~

[Pmation: "Murder She Wrote"]

Pretty good stuff here

I love the "CRUMPLED" paper as the backround you should ad more props back there maybe a pencil or other elements even some colored crumpled paper would be cool, So you have some nice work here the animations are always so smooth and flow well with the animation all the different things happening it makes for some good entertaining fun, you seem to have a lot of these episodes not a bad thing, maybe the shorter ones you could bunch up together in one entry, but anyways nice job here keep up the fantastic work and I look forward for more. I found this flash to be pretty decent now ofcourse there are some things that can bemade better and much more improved those details are explained later, but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, but anyways decent flash I had fun with them, and most of all keep up the fantastic flash work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should ad more props back there in the backround along with the nifty crumpled paper, maybe a pencil or other elements even some colored crumpled paper would be cool

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #95]

Great and entertaining

The "VOICE" was low sounding but the "INTRO" music was fin so maybe it can be readjusted or something, An entertaining piece ofcourse well submission I mean but you cant but fall in love with sergio and all his antics that he brings to the front desk lol, You have executed the humor Exceptionally well and thats one of the things I really like this one, but anyways good epsiode once again. And so there you have it another entry submitted with some interesting and odd happenings but those are the ones I like, it was not the perfect of submissions but you still added a twist here and there, and I generally enjoyed your presentation, I guess this type of flash may only target a certain market of viewers but guess thats ok too. Great Work As expected Love it, And I am quite a fan of your work now based on this submission, My only thought on this one is that you keep making stuff like it, it was a fantastic piece of work, And I look forward to more of your fine work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sound issues but you already know this from past reviews.

~X~

[dancin bernie]

Classic newgrounds

Well I have to say that this was one of the old classics of newgrounds it got saved and is with us forever lol, its "AMUSING" to see now a days, my advice for this one is for sure to ad some backround and some smoother animating but Im assuming it was just a test.

~X~

[VNV Nation Dedication]

Cool

So this was pretty cool, VNV Nation is a good band and they have some good sounds the visuals were notbad I think you could have made this longer with a few more visuals, and putting a stop action script on the start of the frames would stop the loop, but anyways nice work you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have made this longer with a few more visuals, and putting a stop action script on the start of the frames would stop the loop

~X~