XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[pkmn generations]

intriging

pokemon at its best, Wow, it's not often that you stumble across a flick that's so intriging like this one you have here. This really makes me want to go back and think and check this one out again, this is something that I would suggest to friends to see. Some portions I wasnot too fond of, But you had Substantial positive stuff aswell, so nice efforts I like what you are doing here. anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have been nice if you had some dialog on this with the pokemon

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[M-Candy: Coffee Rush]

Wow crazy

Wow I have to say that was pretty crazy it was somewhat short but not too much but the film itself was pretty crazy it was a good animation though and kept me excited so nice job indeed on this one, kind of entertaining hope you make more entertaining animations like this in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no major changes needed here.

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[The 5 stages of Work Loss]

That was good

A good story here real life experiences seem to come alive much better on flash animation, but you did a really good job re doing this and was pretty amazing so nice work here, I love the story and the ending was perfect verywell done animation you have here, you should make more like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just make more.

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[Bad Dream Jam]

Interesrting

So this was somewhat interesting

I like the whole dream scene but seems too short you should have took it into some other elements and more longer, also the looping you should fix so if its a flash program maybe a stop action code but if not im not sure, anyways nice animation here keep making more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and the looping maybe fix that too.

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CroDavid responds:

I am trying to improve but i still dont know the best things to add to my animations. I will try what you recommended. Thank you for the criticism! :D

[Little Brother]

Notbad

So this was notbad this was pretty cool, I like the voice work here it works well and This is the third film of yours I have seen sofar and have to say that this was actually pretty good I like your animations, I do wish these had some subtitles though, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish these had some subtitles though

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[Trust]

Short

Well that was not too bad it was actually pretty good, the visuals of the animation was pretty good very smooth and flowed so well I was really impressed with all the elements here, so nice work indeed, wish it was longer though, anyways nice effort on this movie here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish it was longer though

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[FILM QUEST - Episode 1]

Really nice

The action scenes in this are really intense, very nice "VISUALS" aswell you really bring out the detail in characters and even the action scenes so nice effects all around, you should make more of this I would for sure review more of your work, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of this its awsome.

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[Night's Animation Demo Reel]

Notbad

So this was notbad, the animation of it was pretty swell, the music was pretty kicking nice character designs and some good flow of animation, I think adding more head and limb animation would make it more flowing, and that was just an idea besides all that this was pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think adding more head and limb animation would make it more flowing and smooth

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[Sonic Seconds: Volume 5]

Very good movie here

I like the animation here and glad you made another film here the graphics are pretty good, This Leaps into action, I thought this was a very nice submission! The coolest part about it was probably how well everything was set up. You got a great sense that you were in a world with a lot of nifty ideas and such. There was Substantial possitives in this and thats what I really have enjoyed about it all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very nice film no changes needed as it was pretty fantastic

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