XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zebu Clock - Ep. 1]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i liked this one, and i must say noba don the clock designs, aswell as a sorta story that seem to be better then alot of effortless, movies, so nice job there, but you should think about adding some subtitles...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some subtitles would be a start...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining classic clock flash...

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[Brother Battle]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, and funny, seemed abit on the short side though, maybe add a few more sprite characters and make the flash longer, anyways notbad it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters and more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny sprite animation...

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[Little Fish, Little Fish]

((( CUTE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was a cute flash very funny, and had some nice voice-overs but the voice and the mouth animation didnt match exactly, but its almost there, maybe some subtitles would work, anyways cute animation keep up the good work up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved lip-synking, and some subtitles would help...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute fish animation with some good voices...

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[comedy cramps]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting, had some neat backround music, but lacked in content, such as some backrounds, and colors and so on, so you may want to re-work this out somehow...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content especialy some color...

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more effort in graphics and content...

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[Halloweenage]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i dont know why but this made me laugh, anyways it was a neat flash with a really nice blue tone which made it more entertaining, you should make it abit longer though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, with more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
Blue for hallowween...

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Headless-Chicken-Man responds:

thank you, this is an excellent example of a good review, you didn't resort to slating or personal remarks and you expressed your crtisisms politely

[Beck - Loser (music vid)]

((( COULD HAVE HAD MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This could have had more, maybe even a base backround besides the white one you had, it needs some sorta animation aswell, something that lets the users know what its all about, and why its like this now...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color,a dn animation...

~~OVERALL~~
Very bland needs more...

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[MoreLikeBlue]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was impressive, very nice theme, good idea, nice artwork, and some smooth animation, very welldone from start to finish i was really impressed, nice work indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as its perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
Great flash from start to finish...

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[Bin Laden Shape Craze]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was interesting kinda random, and seemed to lack backrounds, also abit short, and on top of that didnt have a replay button, so you may want to re-work this one out with a few upgrades...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some buttons, maybe a preloader, and add some backrounds besides the white one you had...

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing shape tweens, needs more then just that though, good luck...

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