XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stupid Little Baby]

(( NICE GRAPHICS ))

~~REVIEW~~
Nice graphics, especialy the character, and i like the whole "B/W" styles, you should have added abit of color here and there, also you may want to add some sorta "SUBTITLES" just for an overall better outcome, anyways nice job, it was a decent animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash, neat graphics could be improved though.

~X~

[What happened to sanity 1]

(( LOL FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i did get a funny laugh out of this, and the sprite work was notbad, but it does need some more effort in making it a more full flash, and more effects aswell, but from what i saw it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression of the file is much needed.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny action, interesting outcome, but does need some compression.

~X~

[Ghosts - Fake or Real?]

(( COULD BE IMPROVED ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting but could be slightly improved, such as some improved "FONTS" and text, something that stands out, and you may want to shorten the intro credits it seemed to lag abit, other then that it was kinda interesting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fonts and text, aswell as shortening the starting.

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting idea, could use more visuals, other then that it was entertaining.

~X~

[Ninja Supplements]

(( ENTERTAINING ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL This was a neat parody of an add, i like the ninja characters but you could have given to them abit more detail though but still a funny add, nice work, you should make more of these, anyways nice flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improved details on the characters like more animation from them.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny add of something for ninjas, it will make you laugh abit, nice job.

~X~

[Edutainment: Canadian Law]

(( INTERESTING ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting i like the character you had, as for the flash it was interesting, not sure how its done in canada but this was some insight on it heh, you could add some better backrounds as the white ones seemed abit bland.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds something with color and such.

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting, could use more visuals though anyways nice job, keep it up.

~X~

[The Fight for Serene]

(( ABIT SHORT ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well that was very short, and could be improved, it needs more animation, aswell as some much needed added color, but most of all more content is needed, notbad sofar, just needs more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting... Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more
shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but could be improve don and made into something nice.

~X~

[7 Days: Part 2]

(( NOTBAD ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i liked it, cant say that i have seen the others but since this was very interesting i think i will, also you had some nice effects but could have more especialy with the backrounds, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more effects, like lighting and such.

~~OVERALL~~
Neat efefcts and neat flash hope to see the others soon.

~X~

[Castlevania SoTN Alt Pro]

(( AWSOME ANIMATION ))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i was very impressed with this, im a big fan of anything Castlvania and this was up there with the best, i did however think the file was abit large but not as bad as i thought it was impressive work, you should make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing just make more please.

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome animation from the start to the finish.

~X~

[A Bunch of NESsed Up Crap]

(( LOL ))

~~REVIEW~~
I dont know why but this made me laugh, it had lots of things that were funny and somewhat random which i like, it was a decent flash nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and reduce the filesize, was abit slow in loading up.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and silly just like i like em, nice job.

~X~

Gunstar-X responds:

Wow. People are still watching my first Flash Movie? Awesome. But, this was my first flash, a lot of experimentation and screw ups occured. Thus the big file size. I apologize about it, but I deleted the Source File so due to space problems, I can't go back and edit it.

Of course now, space is no longer a problem. A Bunch of SNESsed Up Crap should be out sometime this month, if all goes well.