XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[comedy cramps]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting, had some neat backround music, but lacked in content, such as some backrounds, and colors and so on, so you may want to re-work this out somehow...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content especialy some color...

~~OVERALL~~
Needs more effort in graphics and content...

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[Halloweenage]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i dont know why but this made me laugh, anyways it was a neat flash with a really nice blue tone which made it more entertaining, you should make it abit longer though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, with more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
Blue for hallowween...

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Headless-Chicken-Man responds:

thank you, this is an excellent example of a good review, you didn't resort to slating or personal remarks and you expressed your crtisisms politely

[Beck - Loser (music vid)]

((( COULD HAVE HAD MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This could have had more, maybe even a base backround besides the white one you had, it needs some sorta animation aswell, something that lets the users know what its all about, and why its like this now...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color,a dn animation...

~~OVERALL~~
Very bland needs more...

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[MoreLikeBlue]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was impressive, very nice theme, good idea, nice artwork, and some smooth animation, very welldone from start to finish i was really impressed, nice work indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as its perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
Great flash from start to finish...

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[Bin Laden Shape Craze]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was interesting kinda random, and seemed to lack backrounds, also abit short, and on top of that didnt have a replay button, so you may want to re-work this one out with a few upgrades...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some buttons, maybe a preloader, and add some backrounds besides the white one you had...

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing shape tweens, needs more then just that though, good luck...

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[For Tamale]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well illadmit while it did give me abit of a laugh it was ok abit random though and seemed very short, maybe add abit more to it. it was funny though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content, add some new characters and maybe abit less random...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny clock flash from the old days...

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[My Paper Airplane]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it could use some sound though, but was neat seeing it fly through all the buildings and stuff, you should also make it cause some chaos or something anyways it was amusing...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the plain cause chaos like hittint the cat or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flying plane...

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[Movie Pitch]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, the characters were decent and the animation was actually funny, this could be in its own series, add more characters and you got somthing here, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more episodes and more characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters and god animation...

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