XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Custom Hero - Basic 2]

Great game

Not everyone uses or puts the effort through for an Intro but with this flash here you made a nice intro and really brings it out to start things off, so congrats on the effort here especialy with the intro, Wow i must say this was very impressive im not too fond of the button style of dress-up but this was pretty advanced the buttons could be easier to click on though, kinda hard with just a plus and minus it was real small so some work on the buttons would be a start in the right direction, Now i must say this was a good dress up and i have seen and reviewed alot of them, you did great with the design of the character and even gave him some nice animation, thats something i have not seen much of all in these kinds of games, even the "MUSIC" you chose fits so very well, so awsome job all around on this, And with this flash it was actually pretty good, iliked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, ihave posted a few ideas i hope they help to improve on this so good luck, and i hope to see improvments soon, or in the near future. anyways great game great new style here and overall fun and entertaining game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And to start making things better here are some tips and ideas that could really make it better, and thats a plus for everyone so here are some ideas. Make a sleeker looking button something flashy and fancy, maybe something that has some animation as you hover over it aswell. something that looks nice and has appeal, the better your flash looks the more the fans will enjoy it. Decent game here, i really like the effort you put into this, one thing you could have done though was put more effort on the backrounds, it just seemed too bland. but besides all that it was pretty good stuff.

~~OVERALL~~
And once again i find one of those unique and good flash's so glad i saw this it was pretty good and had some entertaining value to it, nice effort here. I look forward to seeing other stuff like this, hope everyone enjoyes this. I really liked what you offered and presented especialy with the characters animation, keep up the awsome work here.

[Zombie Survival Quiz]

Interesting

This was interesting especially since i play zombies on another game, but anyways so this has some good quality to it and all, but the redtext and blood border like, was too dark you should brighten up the red-ness of it all while still keeping the backround dark it was kind of hard to read and such, that was the first thing i noticed about this so nice effort there, So i scored an A not sure if thats good or bad but this was a pretty fun game, Also as another idea for each question maybe a differant backround could pop up or something, anyways keep up thegood work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things could make this better like a more brighter red text, and even changing up the backround from time to time would also be another option.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun zombie quizz nothing more was pretty entertaining though.

[The Snow Runs Red]

This was fun

~~REVIEW~~
This had some good action in it, thats what kinda kept me in it, It did get better as it went on though, so had a decent "BUILD-up" to it, was kind of neat, i do like that there was action in it and alot more then i thought, The powerups was pretty fun, made it worth while if you ask me, This was also pretty large in area so it did make for a good action scenes, So all and all this had some nice elements to it even a good quality of "GRAPHICS" and detail to it so notbad at all on those elements, as for some tips on making things better, to be honest i like it as is and thinks it works just fine, so nice job indeed, keep up the decent work especially on this flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as for some helpfull tips as i mentioned, its pretty good as is, had decent graphics, nice animation, and had lots of action so from start to end it was ok.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun flash here lots of action, nice graphics and even animation.

[Kingdom in the Clouds]

wow greatflash here.

I must admit this was pretty fun and entertaining, the "INTRO" was pretty good itself. always nice to see an intro on games like this, so nice job there, and the "MUSIC" was even better there aswell so nice job there aswell, Soas iplay the game theres alot of great quality to it even some "CUTE" to it with the baby sounds,and overall the "VOICES" in general made this an even more fun game, sowed alot of effort and great quality to it, so nice job there, And as i play a few levels the levels actually seem kind of easy and pretty straight forward, now thats great for the start but, I thought i was gonna see the same "CLOUD" monstor over and over so was glad as the levels progressed that i saw some differant designs, One issue i did have was sometimes when the character goes off to the ends of the screen he gets stuck, and the keys dont always work to get him out, thats something that could be looked into. Passing thefirst "PHASE" of the game really got you more interested in playing, its a simple game of shooting back and fourth, but i liked it, the differant upgrades were ok could have some better "EFFECTS" about them though, and while i said its basic left and right defender type of game you should make it more unique and differant and allow for more differant elements of places to go with the baby and such. But anyways as not to bore you with myreview i found your game fun and entertaining but do look into that one issue about going off to side and sticking, anyways great game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So if anytthing it was an ok game there was some issues not much but hope it helps, One issue i did have was sometimes when the character goes off to the ends of the screen he gets stuck, and the keys dont always work to get him out, thats something that could be looked into.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game, cute great sounds and alot of effort went into this , very nice indeed.

[Notepad Drawing Collab 2010]

Fun

I found this game to be pretty fun and i really liked how you presented it, so it did have the effort and thats abig one, i was not too fond of the "SIZE" of it but thats something i can always get past, it was nice to see you winning some awards for this and that shows the effort and time you put into this, hope you win lots more. so Congrats on the awards. It did take some time to load that being with the 11 megs but again that was ok because there was alot of good things about this game including the quality and style of it so props to you on a fantastic game, It is always nice to see an intro on these things and thats not something everyone takes the time to do, so awsome job and great effort in doing so, shows your commitment to your work even if it was just a little intro its makes it more quality so nice job there. This was a fantastic piece from all the art to the great music really welldone here ill even forgive you for the size hehe, anyways great job and congrats on everything with this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The medals seemed abit too hard, the size was kinda high but well worth the time.

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome game lots to see and do, very good quality with this one.

[Kiss Twilight Boys!]

This was a cute game.

Lol this was a cute game, the twilight theme was funny but wonder why the whole bieber theme got mixed in with them aswell, but it was pretty funny and made for a good lil waster game, it was quick and short, could have used more medals in more progression of levels, as for some advice to make the game better well as suggested some more medals, maybe some differant styles of clicking on stuff, just an idea though, but overanll this was a pretty fun game, The "FLASHING" was a bit much maybe breakdow levels so you can add more medals in differant levels, and maybe flashing is one level but you shouldnt have the flashing throughout that can get abit anoying. Also i think this culd use a better "MENU" page maybe more designed better with a fresh look to it, but anyways good game cute and amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would start with some advice for some better interface of an menu, something more fresh and sharp. The flashing was a bit much maybe breakdow levels so you can add more medals in differant levels, and maybe flashing is one level but you shouldnt have the flashing throughout that can get abit anoying.

~~OVERALL~~
This was a short game yet it presented some amusing fun.

[FMA Dress Up]

Pretty basic and simple

Well i must admit this was really "BASIC" and pretty "SIMPLE" didnt offer much on the eyes of backrounds, and variaty of items those are some key stuff in alot of these deress ups, also a larger "CANVUS" would also be a plus, the items you did have were ok and some of them were kinda unique but you still needed more variaty and more random stuff including some "ANIMATED" items the music was pretty good it was differant and made itmore enjoyble but you should also think about dding some more music choices, Good effort here, and i found some parts even better then others, it was actually a fun flash, it also has its good and bad moments, those are things that happen, but anyways keep up the awsome work and i really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like what you have presented here, So here are some ideas and tips that should help on making this better, View screen seemed an issue as it was sorta small, and didnt have much of anything that way, so as making this game better a suggestion might be to stretch the screen out larger so that you have more room for items and more stuff, hope it helps. As a nifty idea you can put in some backrounds or even go one step farther and have a Scene selection option maybe with five choices of differant backrounds, just an idea but there does need to be an improved backround. Add some items more items and some that have animated stuff like blinking lights and eyes stuff like that.

~~OVERALL~~
This was pretty decent if you ask me, has alot of potential to it, can even better with more improvment, i have suggested a few ideas, may they help or not, its a pretty good flash love the flow and vibe of it, so nice work. a good dress up game here could use a few changesand upgrades though.

[Quest - Demo]

It was fun

So this was a fun game, the "AUDIO" gets kind of anoying you may want to add some variaty in the mixof sounds and such and music ofcourse maybe have it rotate after about 2 min or something. the game is fun, the buttons could use a sleeker look aswell, You may even want to think about upgrading the game with some medals, it would really make it more enjoyble and give it some new veiws and new fans, just something to think about as medals really give games some better quality and more replay value. With all that said you cando alot more with this i have made a few suggestions and i do hope they help to improve on this, now dont get me wrong you have something decent here and the effort shows but could still use a few more additions of stuff and so on, so go ahaead and give some new ideas a try. anyways good game, it was short lived but still was somewhat fun, i have suggested a few ideas hope it helps to improve on your game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The music/audio is kind of anoying you may want to add some variaty in the mix of sounds and such and music ofcourse maybe have it rotate after about 2 min or something. This game could use some medals, there are a ton of things you you could do to make it so that the flash gets some sorta points so that the medals can be achieved, but something to think about. the button was ok but would have been nice to see more of a Flashier and more fancy button. maybe something with animation also, like when you hover over it and click and release, just something more fancy.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a fun game, here but could use a few new upgrades as suggested above so give it a try, the game can be better as it has some decent options.

[Girly Girl (Dress-Up) x 2]

One of the best

Oh wow this was probably one of the best dress-up games i have seen in a very long time, seems like you really put your efforth through on this one and thats very impressive the few things that really caught my eye on this game was first the variaty and amount of differrant stuff, and not just duplicates either, then you had some unique stuff like pony tails and so on, very nice indeed, there was some music and that made it even better, the drawings them self of clothing, props and even character were really good with some nice detail aswell, so this was pretty fantastic and i found this to be almost perfect, awsome job here keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was one of the best i seen in a really long time theres still room for improvments, i suppose with this one some added backrounds wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was a great game with lots of variaty and allows the user lots of unique designs.

[Cuboy: Cubeture 2]

Fun game

Notbad on this flash but this one didnt make much sense to me, it was ok though and i got some humor out of it, but again didnt make much sense and could be better, Its a pretty good game though regardless, there is lots to do and once you play it abit you do get a better understanding of it all, so thatsa plus, This Cuboy was kind of interesting never really head of him but it was amusing regardless, The cat was kinda funny and it being a baddie made it even better, So all and all this was a pretty good game, had a bit of story to it and that made it even more enjoyble so nice effort there, as for making it better not sure, it was a pretty welldone flash if you ask me. I do like the supense you give these games though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So my advice to make this better, would be make it more longer and throw in much more random stuff and more humor would also be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game lots to see, very entertaining and somewhat amusing, kinda confusing at first, but gets better, anyways good game here all others should enjoy.