XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[40 Optical Illusions 2]

Fun game

Wanted to say that the intro was a nice touch, i dont see much of that but when there is a menu page, intro page, but you really did some nice designs and such, gives the whole flash more depth and qulity so grats on a nice menu/intro page. Now i must say these types of game are fun, And thanks for the qualityoption that was pretty good, Ok so this was a pretty good game, i actually got a few of the medals wich was nice, the "DESIGN-LAYOUT" was kind of sloppy though and you should think about adding some more effort there as it was just kinda sloppy, So maybe as an improvment option a more fresher look more borders, maybe not so much use of random stuff either, It was a fun game though maybe make it "HARDER" aswell as this one seemed too easy i thought. and addinga few more medals wouldnt hurt aswell, well these are just a few ideas i hope they help, also one last thing, it was hard to click on some buttons mainly the "TEXT" only buttons like the "LOW-MED-HIGH" buttons that could be better looked at aswell, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot i can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and i liked everything i saw here, so keep up the good work. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok I will start off with saying this is actually pretty decent the flash has good potential, it does need some more work there, below are a few ideas that could make it better but does need your effort on this, So use some of the ideas it will greatly make this better and allow you to have more viewers to your flash aswell. So i suggested a few ideas, one being that the layout needs more of a better design and more fresh look and less random colors here and there. A great addition are medals to any flash, and i like the ones you had on here, allthough it could use much more medals, people on this site really love the medals and could really enjoy it more with some more medals, so give it a try it wont hurt.

BanglaBoy96 responds:

Thanks for the well written review :)

[Kirby Designer]

Kirby dress up notbad.

Ok so first off this was notbad, but it was more on the "PLAIN" side of things, the whole button style is ok but, it kind of limits the creativty of the dress up and anly allowing whats on the button selection, so if you allowd it as a drop and drag or even a snap on style, then theres more creativity to it, the button way just is too limited. I also noticed you didnt have any backrounds at all, thats one thing that really makes dress-ups even better is showing the dress up characters in there related format, so adding some sort of backround changer would be a great element for the game, somthing to try and wouldnt be that hard to set up. The items you did have were notbad but also limited so very few there, so add more "ITEMS" more varitay, and also some extra items with some sort of animated elements to them, animated ones will give it a unique feel aswell. This was notbad at all, pretty decent flash here, i enjoyed it from the get go, there are some things that could be worked on in order for it to be even better, dont get me wrong its pretty good as is but with some more extras it would be even better, but anyways decent flash i look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a pretty good flash if you ask me, but it couldbe better with a few suggestions and ideas, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. The whole button style is ok but, it kind of limits the creativty of the dress up and anly allowing whats on the button selection, so if you allowd it as a drop and drag or even a snap on style, then theres more creativity to it, the button way just is too limited. The items you did have were notbad but also limited so very few there, so add more "ITEMS" more varitay, and also some extra items with some sort of animated elements to them, animated ones will give it a unique feel aswell.

[Emo Pet:Dressup v2.0]

Hmm view screen kinda small

So i would start working on this abit more, its actually pretty good but there are a few things that can be improved like with the size of the view screen it was just too small for the detailed items and small items you have, So a larger view screen would be just right for this one, The "MUSIC" was great here, and the art and detail was prettygood, but to show off some of that stuff you want to add some more stuff, and with a larger view screen you can add more items, i have noticed you used the "DUPLICATION" idea and made alot of the same outfits except you just changed the color, thats ok but you need more random and unique stuff so make each one differant from the other. so in general everything should be bigger some stuff was too tiny to click on like the "SKIN COLOR" I really took a liking to this flash, and grew on me there was lots of nice stuff on this, and overall got a good feeling from it and was great to see, now ofcourse it could be better and with some more effort it can be just that, so hope soon to see more of this and much more of your work, anyways untill then keep it real. So anyways look forward to more of what you have in store for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a neat game here, It could be even better though because it was decent but withs ome fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. Now i have always enjoyed these types of games and i must say that this would have been much better and muchimproved with a much larger screen, it was more on the small side so didnt allow for much creation and the items kinda hurt for that, so as an improvment idea make the view screen larger. I have noticed you used the Duplication idea and made alot of the same outfits except you just changed the color, thats ok but you need more random and unique stuff so make each one differant from the other. Not to be picky but one of the issues i found in this one, was the lack of backrounds, the ones you had up there were abit on the bland side, have something that has something to do with the game content, do maybe an image, or some characters in art that are related to the main character or item. So theres a few ideas, they could help to improve on this decent game so give them or some of them a try.

[Create a Creature ll]

Decent game

First off you did a nice job on this the intro was great aswell, and second the music was spectacular really had a lot of quality to it and made this more enjoyble to this game, Now i can see why this is a knock off to dead babies dress-up games but you did change it up somewhat and thats important too, two things i didnt notice that you could have put in this was that there was no backrounds, just a blue one, and there was alot of items but there was no animated items so these ideas could make it even better and more differant from the dead baby series and something to try out, The items you do have on this are unique and differant and pretty impressive, and could use for some animated stuff, but you already know that, And soonce again this was a decent Flash i really liked what you presented, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, so with that said keep up the good work it was a pretty decent work of flash,hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is were i suggest a few ideas that could help to improve on this, hope it does help, and remember it can only make things better. Decent presentation of stuff and pieces here, it still could use more stuff though, thats where it lacked, So more items and props, and have some unique and colorful ones aswell. Some animation on the items would also be a plus.
Backrounds would be a plus on this, just the simple regular palate is ok but dressing up the backround with some scene from the character topic would be nice, or even just adding some sorta nice graphics in the backround would be pretty cool too. Anyways hope that helps, and hope to see an upgrade soon.

[Dress Up Sonic Hedgehog]

Sonic is cool

sonic is pretty cool, and this was a decent game, i did however think the viewscreen of it all was kinda small, so as an idea or tip here try making the palate or view screen much larger and bigger, and the hedgehog could of used more items of the hair type the blue spiky type of stuff so i guess you could call it hair but he needs more props of that, the backround was notbad, maybe some more added backrounds like on a selector of backrounds, and nice option on the music thats another area where you could add a cycle of music selections, After seeing and messing with this one i thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anywayskeep up the work i like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more. Anyways keep up the decent work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this is were I suggest some ideas and tips to better improve stuff, Your game is actually pretty good doesnt need much but could use a few things. the music thats another area where you could add a cycle of music selections, the hair type the blue spiky type of stuff so i guess you could call it hair but he needs more props of that, So as a tip or two, you could work on your backrounds more, what you have is ok but having the backrounds more enhanced with some sorta design would be one way, or some image in the backround that is somehow related to your game. so these idea and tips could make it a better game give them a try cant hurt at all, just a little more effort thats all.

[The Sigworminator 6000]

Wow lots of items with this one.

Now heres a dress-up with lots of "ITEMS" theres just a supper large amount and so much variaty and thats what i look for in a dress-up game so props to you on the variatys of stuff but it does need some "ANIMATED" ones wich is something it really lacked but the variaty was very nice to have, The music was pretty good aswell, so nice job there, The creativity on this was pretty impressive, Love this dress up it has everything large view screen, music lots of items, just needs some good animated stuff, maybe adding that on an upgrade will be an option for next time. And now that i think about it there should be some "BACKROUNDS" but anyways keep up the good work, So with all that said, this was pretty decent, allthough it could use more stuff and such, also suggested below, it was still pretty good just needs a tad more effort but it will pay off just keep working on it, and always do what is fun to you because that will make for a good flash so anyways keep up the awsome work, creativity is your friend.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i will start off this part with a few ideas and suggestions that could make it much better and overall bringing more viewers too seeing your content. I really like these games, have had alot of fun creating differant stuff, but with this one the backrounds were too plain and could use some better graphics, more design to them, maybe you could even have a few backrounds that change up every once in awhile.

[Demonic Courtship dressup]

A demon dress-up

Cool this was a decent one, a demon dress-up was kinda neat, I did notice there was no "HAIR" parts you only had clothing and accesories wich is ok, but would have been cool with some hair and random demon items, also alot of your dress up clothing was all too simular you should not just copy and past but make each one differant and random from each and other one, it would make your whole game alot better and more enjoyble. nut defanantly add more random stuff including more dews with this one, Also some backrounds would be really great for this, another thing that this game lacked in. Great flash here, i really like what you did here and the Effort does show, there was a few things that could be made better and some extra effort on your part would, theres a few things that would be great for this flash and it would show with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck on your other flash pieces i did enjoy this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I found this to be a decent flash, but still thought it could be better, I hope with abit more effort and some more ideas as suggested it can be much improved, You are going to want to do a alot more if you want this to stand up above the crowd, there are a number of things that could make it differant one would be not to use the same old patterns in items but more random and unique stuff, But the general idea is to make it your own and not like everyother one out there. Work more on the backrounds, the plain or just white one is ok but would be much better if you had some sorta colored version or maybe have the user chose there own kind, like with the click of a button of some kind. This is pretty good but needs more items, make some odd and unique items aswell, and some animated ones wouldnt hurt. just a few ideas that could improve on this decent game of yours. So all in all hope this helps and i think they would greatly making the flash more fun and high in quality.

[Create-a-Mole]

3
Fun game

This was a decent dress-up here it was also at the sametime "SIMPLE" i liked alot what you did here and you added lots of differant stuff even some animated things wich was good effort on your side, also loved the "MUSIC" box so nice effort there, The one thing this lacks and alot of other dress ups lack is not putting in a selection of backrounds, so thats something you could upgrade it with, even throwing in some sorta colored backround would be a nice little option, and maybe even a fe wmore animated options aswell,but anyways nice job and effort, You have an idea here and something decent here, i had fun with this one but it could use some more effort as suggested below and above and hope those ideas help to make it even better for all, but even as it is it was pretty decent if you ask me, keep up the decent efforts though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
everything can allways be improved and or made better, may it be the little things so hope these small yet helpfull ideas help. Now games like this are always fun to play, besides the items, it could use a better backround idea, maybe some sort of scene selector so that there is more to work off besides just a plain one as the one you have now.

[Habbo Hotel Dress Up]

Its a nifty game

Like i said its a nifty game and you picked a good "THEME" with the Habbo. never played that game but have seen it before so that was pretty cool, but one thing i have noticed is that on all the 3 differant characters alot of the clothing and props were all too much of the same, just duplicated colors adn such, thats ok but you want to try and make it more your own style with more random and unique styles, andanother thing is this needs some backrounds and even more "ITEMS" and since we are on the topic a larger creation screen would be great, as it would allow for a much bigger view and more creation, aswell room for much more items, This was a good game, lots of stuff here and some great music the music was pretty nifty, I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all good Flash, could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse, i have suggested a few ideas to help and hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already. One thing i noticed, alot of the clothing and props were all too much of the same, just duplicated colors adn such, thats ok but you want to try and make it more your own style with more random and unique styles, and as mentioned above, a larger creation screen would be great, as it would allow for a much bigger view and more creation, aswell room for much more items,

Aprime responds:

Cheers for the review. I read it all. It was really helpful.
Thanks for taking your time out to review this game in such depth