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[Habbo Hotel Dress Up]

Its a nifty game

Like i said its a nifty game and you picked a good "THEME" with the Habbo. never played that game but have seen it before so that was pretty cool, but one thing i have noticed is that on all the 3 differant characters alot of the clothing and props were all too much of the same, just duplicated colors adn such, thats ok but you want to try and make it more your own style with more random and unique styles, andanother thing is this needs some backrounds and even more "ITEMS" and since we are on the topic a larger creation screen would be great, as it would allow for a much bigger view and more creation, aswell room for much more items, This was a good game, lots of stuff here and some great music the music was pretty nifty, I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all good Flash, could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse, i have suggested a few ideas to help and hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already. One thing i noticed, alot of the clothing and props were all too much of the same, just duplicated colors adn such, thats ok but you want to try and make it more your own style with more random and unique styles, and as mentioned above, a larger creation screen would be great, as it would allow for a much bigger view and more creation, aswell room for much more items,

Aprime responds:

Cheers for the review. I read it all. It was really helpful.
Thanks for taking your time out to review this game in such depth

[Dress a devil *BETA*]

Needs more items

There was just too few items infact there was not alot of stuff on this game, i have seen and played alot of dress-up games even made a few, you should really think about redoing this and adding much more items. could use a change of backrounds aswell, the one you had was ok but could use much more, also i didnt hear any musicor sounds thats another option you should think about, the drawing of the girl was not bad kinda cute but could also be better, But anyways you have some good work here allthough some more effort for better improvment could be done for an overall better out come, Its not perfect but is ok for what you did supply in content, so on that part of stuff it was notbad at all. But overall it does need more stuff going around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here are a few tips and ideas on making this somewhat better, it never hurts to improve on stuff, even in the smallest stuff. The items were very few so adding much more with lots to chose from allow the user to be very creative, so add more items, props and even adding some odd ball stuff, would be great. Music and sound/fx is good, this flash could use some atleast some nifty sound/fx, but some music choices would also be a nice touch, and show good effort towards all this, Needs some sorta backround changer, so you can see differant backrounds, Maybe even something that rotates every few minutes based on the dress-up topic ofcourse.

[Another Dress-up v2.1]

Hmm notbad of a game

This was a decent game, i like dress-up games and this was pretty neat i really like how you have two differant dress ups in this one of the face and the other one of the character all a good choices and you had alot of items on the first but not the second, you should think about adding some backrounds or something that the backrounds can change and all, but mostly something other then the "WHITE" bland one, try something new there, Great flash here, i really like what you did here and the Effort does show, there was a few things that could be made better and some extra effort on your part would, theres a few things that would be great for this flash and it would show with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off decent flash you have here, Ok I will start off with saying this is actually pretty decent the flash has good potential, it does need some more work there, below are a few ideas that could make it better but does need your effort on this, So use some of the ideas it will greatly make this better and allow you to have more viewers to your flash aswell. So as a tip or two, you could work on your backrounds more, what you have is ok but having the backrounds more enhanced with some sorta design would be one way, or some image in the backround that is somehow related to your game. But anyways hope to see improvments soon.

[Mad Dress Up]

Decent

Nice dress-up game here especially from an old regular, and i must say this one had some very good "EFFORT" the music was fitting, and its the first dress-up game with a scene selector from the early days so nice efforts there, all the options with guns and dress up props was pretty good, you had a good amount of variaty and nice detail on them aswell, so once again nice job there, Now you went the extra mile to have some "ACTION" stuff going on like a punch and so on, very nice indeed, so as for improving tips and points, I believe you covered everything so its as good as it gets, and nice job on the differant music selection aswell, the whole game was well rounded and had everything you could ask for in a dress up game and even more so nice job and nioce efforts on this fantastic game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you had alot of stuff from variaty of items, to scenes and even good music choices, the area that could have used more stuff would have to be, more Action-stuff, meaning more stuff and unique action buttons, you only had the 4.

toxicbomb responds:

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[Dress up Sanatana]

Poorly done

Not to be mean or anything but this one does need lots more effort it was poorly done, first of all the "ITEMS" are too small, and should be bigger, and the canvas should be larger aswell so that you can have more items and larger ones, the "MUSIC" was great but could also be the reason why the loading time took abit longer then usual. You could also use much more items that you had there was just too few of items and needs more then what you have, also be creative with your items make more random stuff, more unique ones aswell. as said before the music was great but you should have it "LOOP" or give the use an option to loop it or stop it. Anyways i had fun with this, the best part was the music, the rest needs lost more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving on stuff is always a Plus, so here are some decent suggestions on making things better, you should give them a try or atleast a thought. The items were way too smal, you need to make them larger,The screen size was small, you should think about making it somewhat larger, maybe then you can also make more items aswell, a larger screen will allow for more items, and show more quality of those items aswell, give it a try it wont hurt, anyways hope to see improvments soon.Items and accecories are probably the key stuff that really makes up a dress-up game, and seems like your game lacked in alot of them, so i would suggest adding much more items, props and accecories, having some items that were animated somehow would be an extra touch aswell.Backrounds are not a must in these dress-up games, but by putting a lil more effort in them such as, some images and or art graphics, even just some simple scenery would work, but anything would make it better then just a plain palate. As mentioned above, the music was great but you should have it Loop" or give the use an option to loop it or stop it.

[Spirit of the Sea]

A decent game, kinda fun

This was a pretty creative game you have here the "FISH" and "TREES" was suce a great and creative idea and really made it differant and more "UNIQUE" of a game so nice job there i was impressed there, There could be a few added options and features, such as more of some sort of score board, maybe even more "STATS" for more detailed stuff like helth attk dmg etc great stuff like that. and now for the music, its not all the time the music fits games like this but i have to admit you chose the perfect choice of music it flowed perfectly with everything so nice job there, Most of all the graphics were pretty good and the game itself ran pretty smooth so overall a decent game. keep up the fun and most entertaining games.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good of a flash but could use a few more changes, fixes and adjustments to make it even better, and here are just a few ideas that i think would help improve on it greatly, so try them out, a few added options and features, such as more of some sort of score board, maybe even more "STATS" for more detailed stuff like helth attk dmg etc great stuff like that.

[Jumping Fun]

I liked this game

This game has a good concept and has an even better entertainment value, allthough it could use some upgrades and changes wich i ill get too soon enough, The art and graphics on this game were pretty cool, kinda nifty actually, The game does need some extra effort and work, there were some gliching like with the "JUMPING" so you may want to look into that, The music was notbad but also could be better theres alot of selection in the audio portal that could greatly help with this, So with all that said this game is ok but can use some more effort and more work, aswell as a few extras so try some things out fix a few of the gliches and it should be good to go, but anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There was some glichy effects like with the jumping, something that you could fix and make better, Add some differant choices of music, using the audio portal would be a great start for this,