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[Dress Link Up]

Link is cool

So dressing up link is always cool, first i want to comment on the "MENU" page it is pretty neat and nifty could use more images of link and such though, The thing about this is that you made all the same shapes of clothing and just cloned them and thats ok but people cant be creative enough with the same ol same ol product you need to add more unique and random stuff even some animated and odd stuff. There was alot of great things in this flash, some could be better like some little details here and there, but not much but still some stuff could take a looking into as suggested of course, the flash itself kept me interested and wanting to see more, so hope to see more of your works sometime soon. Untill then keep up the awsome work and efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, just a few tips to make things better. As mentioned above you need more unique items, more random stuff not just the same old cut outs, Work more on the backrounds, the plain or just white one is ok but would be much better if you had some sorta colored version or maybe have the user chose there own kind, like with the click of a button of some kind. Add some items more items and some that have animated stuff like blinking lights and eyes stuff like that.

[Hedgehog Designer]

Fun and entertaining game

I must admit this was pretty neat and not how i expected, the Module was really good even had a 3d like feel to it, Now with all the buttons you can really create nice versions and there is some variaty, the button way of dress-up is ok but drag and drop seems to be my fave as it just seems easier to design and be creative, now ofcourse these are just some ideas and such, but for the most part of this it was pretty good i thought, And now for some improvment ideas, lets start with even more items then you have, maybe some random and unique props some that even light up or are animated in some way or another, and last but not least but adding some backrounds and not just the same ol ones, anyways nice work here i really had fun with this game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
everything can allways be improved and or made better, may it be the little things so hope these small yet helpfull ideas help.So as suggested above, lets start with even more items then you have, maybe some random and unique props some that even light up or are animated

[Dress Up Wolverine]

Fun dress-up game

Hmm ok this was notbad, Even though this game was a bit older it still is fun and has a good entertaining value to it, a good game if you ask me, and there are some good, items to chose from, what i have noticed in these types of games is that they lack items and yours are ok but could use a few more, also some sorta music would be nice, aswell as a possible bigger viewcreen allowing you to add more stuff, or even making items and character smaller, and something i try and suggest on other games like this is some sorta backround changer, like differant scenes from the movies and all, just thought i would throw out a few ideas for better improving tips and ideas, anyways nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some things to make this game better are, Bigger viewcreen , backround scene sekector, smaller and more items, more detail and shading on the character and items.

[One Too Many]

Nice game

I like this game, it even has a nice scoreboard thats always a plus, The first thing i noticed with this one was that the music didnt have much depth to it and with the loop you had it on it was kinda repetitive maybe too repetitive, and could have used more variaty and depth within it, so workon the music maybe even add a variaty ofmusic options, Visual graphics cameout well so youdid well there and all the detail showed up even betterso props to you on some awsome graphics and visual detail, So with all that said this game was decent could be better with some music hanges but honestly thats all i found on it, anyways great game it was pleasent and fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all for some improvments i would suggest working on the "MUSIC" add some variaty to the loop or make it longer, or even as suggested make a few differant loops of music in there, that was the only real issue that needs some looking into

[Angel dress up (2)]

A good game you have here

So this was a good game these types are always pretty good if you ask me, But anyways onto your game i love how you had a menu page and love the colorpurple, so that was a nice job, Now this was a cute dress-up game, the items were ok but could have had some more effort like more random itemsmore differant styles and not such duplicates, but for the mostpart it was pretty good, And with this flash it was actually pretty good, iliked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, ihave posted a few ideas i hope they help to improve on this so good luck, and i hope to see improvments soon, or in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a pretty good flash if you ask me, but it couldbe better with a few suggestions and ideas, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. So I will start off here with suggesting some sorta more random items, some animated ones, and stuff you might not normally see, maybe its funny, or even bazzar but something differant, and on another note you also want to add a bunch of items not just a few, I must say i had fun with this, one of the things that bothered me, was that the backrounds were kind of boring that being it was just a blank one or white, just too plain in my eyes, so one way you could fix it up would be To have something besides the white plain stuff, Maybe an image, maybe some color, maybe some design, or even some graphics that changes up every now and then. anyways good luck.

[Ayeka Dress Up]

Another decent game here

So ill start off by saying this is still pretty good even as old of a game as it is, The little but was kind of funny, But anyways this was pretty good there was some nice items of clothing and such, i did think this could have used some sorta backrounds something differant then what you had, and a few more items would have been nice, even throwing in some animated items would be something differant, But anyways you have some good work here allthough some more effort for better improvment could be done for an overall better out come, Its not perfect but is ok for what you did supply in content, so on that part of stuff it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving on stuff is always a Plus, so here are some decent suggestions on making things better, you should give them a try or atleast a thought. Backrounds would be a plus on this, just the simple regular palate is ok but dressing up the backround with some scene from the character topic would be nice, or even just adding some sorta nice graphics in the backround would be pretty cool too.

[Madotsuki's Dream Dock]

Fun and dark

I will start off this review on saying that this was an interesting flash game here, it has itsmomemnts nad can be better but for what it is, i must say that it was alright and pretty amusing, i like some of the stuff you pulledout on this giving it an interesting look, so a nice feel all around with this one good effort and i was pretty impressed with most things on this. Like i said the "VISUALS" were great and had a good look about it all and such, I love the ending here aswell, you really pushed for a "DARK" feel here and that made it for a good flash entry here so i was pretty impressed with this submission and hope to see more work from you soon aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to see more of the little details added along with more effects popping up but also go with the dark touch even more then you already have.

Pienkaito responds:

Thanks for the very helpful review. I'll keep that in mind.