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[Lil' Jose's Build-a-Bot]

Hard and fun game here.

OK so i just want to get this started and mention here that you have something good here you have a good vision of ideas and an overall good concept of stuff, and thats all it really takes to get something like this really going, now throughout the review i may suggest some ideas but thats later in the review, Wow i must say that was a pretty impressive game it really hurts on the fingers cause you have to really do alot with clicking here and there, i would love to see more combonations i think i went thu 3 dif phases and overall was a fun game i really enjoyed it, so nice effort here and hope to see more work from you on this. the game was fun and hard at the same time but it was well worth it, so anyways good game here. and so that brings an end to this review the game was good it had some entertaining value some interest was high on this one, and basicly kept me focused on everything that was going on and i look forward to seeing more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we are in the improvments of this sub,ission, so on this one there is always some sort of room for making things better, i think you covered all the bases though bringing some good elements and fun to it all, so i will post up a few ideas and advice if needed. Maybe a slower pace, and maybe not so much pjases so its somewhat easier.

[Bounce Ball!]

Hmm could use some improvment

First of all the "IDEA" is good and concept of it all, but seems like you "RUSHED" this or something, The interest level of the game only lasts a little abit so you should think about adding more of a "FUN-FACTOR" maybe adding a mini game would be nice, or a few mini games inbetwen your own game here, its something differant and would be a nice touch to this and ofcourse bring up the quality and entertainment level aswell, and as for audio and music there was very little, if any at all, try and chose something from the audio portal, there lots of choices, and for sound/fx theres lots of websites that you can use sound/fx from just takes a little effort, Now this game could be better, but needs more effortmaybe some extra stuff added like sound and some slight new ideas with in the game but in the end it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would start off with some "MINI-GAME" option now i suggest tha idea because the interest level drops out right away so you need something to spice things up, so having a small mini bonus game within your game might improve on it. This also lacked audio and sound/fx or atleast more of it, so add more in that area.

[Cyber Hell 2: i4AI]

Haha ok this was kind of cute

The game it self is fun, and kind of reminds me of "MORTAL KOMBAT" wich is where i think you got the idea especially with the character popping out of the screen and all that was cute, the art and graphics were notbad, and the animation in the game was good, the gameplay was decent but have to think fast on your toes wich was ok, made it that much more fun of a game, and there was a few medals notbad eiether, The music was right on so good touch there and was really good with the flow of action and so on, Some subtitles would be nice for the characters its a nice option to have and you can allow the user to toggle on and off aswell, The game play style almost reminds me of the old classic "SIMON-SAYS" has the same memery type, so thats pretty good, now you could have worked abit better with "EFFECTS" like after each kill more of a flash effect in the backround of some sort. The game does progress to get harder and thats cool, anyways fun game here well worth my time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some subtitles for the comments of the fights and such, Some better effects with each kill even hit more fancy and more flashy effects,

[Feed the Children]

Hmm this is interesting.

I even like the little disclaimer you have on this one aswell, that was sort of funny, and the whole game has a sort of nes feel but guess you had that idea going, This game actually can be hard its touch at first and being able to shoot was a nice feature and stuff, theres lots of stuff going on in the game and that was nice, and made the game for a much more fun and entertaining game, the medals seem hard at first to achieve, but i find this game to be an "ADDICTIVE" one, so nice game here and so on, The game is kind of differant after each play theres lots to do so you made it "FUN" in that aspect and such, but again the medals are too hard it seems about mid laps it gets hard but anyways i still had fun with this, and would recremend it to a friend. but anyways maybe somehow you can make it easire somehow, anyways good luck on anything else you have planned and so on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well make the achievments easier to obtain, not all but atleast the first few.

[Warlords 2 Rise of Demons]

Fun Defender game

First of all, great job on all the "MEDALS" its always a plus to see the effort and with a good amount of medals aswell, I really like that you added so much into the game, that really shows all the "EFFORT" and time put into that, and thats a plus on that alone, so props on that aspect of things, A fun flash you have here theres was lots of great visuals and some nice detail with some pretty good effort on your side of things, I was taken back with this submission, as it was pretty good. Im not too good at these game types but this was still pretty good i thought, and it was differant from some of those simular type of game, You have a good intro page or menu page however its called but i must admitt it was pretty nice, interesting and keeps the viewer interested, so nice effort on the menu page The first reall issue i found with this game was that the file size seemed abit much and thats probably hard on users with slower machines and connections, As for me it didnt really take that long so i suppose it was not thatbig of a deal, but still something that could be looked into, I was rather "SAD" that you couldnt play all the races on the newgrounds version but yet had to go away from it to your site, that was kind of disapointing, I like the "INTRO" that was a nice touch and showed off some nice art scenes, Now the game is pretty deep and you really put some effort into this, so there is alot of plus points on this game, So as i played thru the game it was fun for abit but does tend to get boring after awhile, but it was still a fun and entertaining defender game. Now there are some areas that could be worked on, Faster pace action but anyways good game. While I liked this Game there are some good and bad points about it that could be fixed and adjusted, There are a few suggested ideas later hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good Game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are a plus always making the game better So while this was a pretty interesting game, here are some tips and Ideas that may help to improve on it, So here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. So a great flash, even won some awards and that was a plus especially with this type, just shows some good effort on your part and hope to see more like this soon. Since this Flash was very big in file size, I would suggest some file Compression as it seemed to take awhile to load up. and in the end it will generally attract more viewers to your work. Compressing is probably the best way to go, it could be anything form removing some enhanced graphics maybe a little less detail, maybe the music was on a long loop or even the music was not compressed before hand, and if the file is just too big and you need it that way theres nothing wrong with making two parts to your flash. You should make it possible to play all the races such as the "UNDEAD" as its probably a fan fave, sometimes people dont want to go to a whole new site just to play the same game thats here on newgrounds, just abit dissapointed abit in that aspect of stuff, Another improvment tip would be is to Have the fighters move onward faster.

[Kikyo's Dress Up 0.3]

Good game here

Grat game here great idea and awsome idea with the mini game, So first i will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there.Ok so with this one i saw something differant, and that wa sthe little mini game to earn more items, that was the first time i seen that in any dress upgame, and that should actually be in more games to earn more items, but, you should have had more of the mini games for even more items as the itemsyou did have in this was just too few and even fewer inbetween, and then there was no backrounds thats another one you should add more backrounds and differant ones besides the purple ones and it wouldnt hurt to have a much larger view screen, more otems can be placed and more to see aswell better detail all around, so these are a few ideas and tips that would really improve on this decent flash game, And another tip might be adding some "MEDALS" to the game like with themini game part and thatmight actually work better, This was a decent flash, now ofcourse there were some things that could be better and fixed and such, stated a few of them above and some more tips added below, these tips should help to make it somewhat better if not maybe they will give you some ideas, but even if you didnt use any of these tips you have a decent idea here with this flash, i look forward to seeing much more of your work inthe near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, just a few tips to make things better. You should try and add some Medals to this flash its the perfect fit, not sure how you could match the two types but would give the game more quality and ofcourse some great replay value, something to think about.The one thing with this was the size of the screen or view screen, it was just kind of small and could be larger, that way you can add more stuff to it, larger screen just allows more creation for you and the player so give it a try besides it can makes the game have some more quality that way. Dress-up games like yours here are great and i love these types because you can be very creative, but when you dont have much to chose from you cant do much but a few basic stuff so add much more items and props, Also adding some items that have animated effects would also make it more unique aswell. So you do have a good dress-up game here, one of the things that could be improved on would be the backrounds its too plain or bland as some say, so as an idea why not have it colored, or add some nice flashy graphics to it, or even go forth and put even more effort by having a scene selector in there

[=Button Tutorial 2=]

Decent TUT Here

WEll first off thisis a decent flash entry, there was a few issues that could be worked on, ill explain that later but i must say you still did well and showed that you were putting in the effort and it shows, This had a nice style to it and i was having fun with this aswell, so nice job all together on this, and do lookforward on more from you like this entry. So the "BACKROUNDS" could use some more effort more change there, maybe the color base, This was a decent Tutorial, shows alot of basic and simple ways of tackling the task and thats what will be good for teaching a few people in need of learning the basics, Besides the backrounds the designs and graphics were really well take so nice effort on everything else there, The "MUSIC" seemed somewhat louder then usual so you may want to lower it just a tad, So the "TUTORIAL" itself is kind of on the basic side and will help new flashers, but maybe in the future you should include basic and advance tuts in the same flash so that you can cater to a more variaty of audiance, just a thought anyways, A decent game here I really enjoyed playing around with this, as there was some good vibes from this decent visuals, and somewhat of an entertainment value to this submission, but in the end i liked what you have presented here and was pretty good if you ask me, could use some more to it and such but thats for later, but anyways decent flash entry you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this is where i suggest a few ideas and improvments, cant always do that since some stuff is really good and right on tack, but with this one there was some good points and only a few points of suggestions for improvment, i have suggested a few ideas thruout the review including here, so just think about the ideas and just imrpve and make the weaker points stronger, in-turn commingout with an overall better outcime of an entry.Well ill start off with the backrounds they could use a differant color base, Lowering the sound quality would also be another tip of advice, And lastly but not least try and cater to more of a learning audiance, so the basic tuts are great but also include some more advanced tuts for both types of flash levels and so on.

[NG Audio Elevator]

Kinda like an Audio player

OK so how do i start off this review as these types of submissions tend to have me stumped, but they are still unique in there own way, they bring some nifty elements to the table, and theres alot to visualize among other things, so in general its a decent entry, it was alright in my eyes, There are things i wouldnt mind seeing changed for the better though. So some things that i really liked with this, It was "SIMPLE" and not complicated as some may tend to be with these audio player types, So i would have liked more "INTER-ACTIVITY" since its a game more interactivity by the user would be more enjoyble sine it is labled as a game and what not, just a thought though. The music portion of this is pretty neat like all audio players are and i do like that you have put some effort into it, wouldnt mind seeing it have even more effort so its not just like a media player but more of something differant aswell. The fact that this does promote other artists is another nice option, The layout and design of this was actually notbad, aswell as the graphics allthough could use more depth to them, But anyways other then things that have already been said i did think this was a unique flash entry, there are some improvments that can be made, but thats for later, But i got some fun and joy out of this and it was nifty messing with it, so overall a decent flash game here, but in the end could still use more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well as we come to the end of the entire review this is where i suggest a few ideas and tips and some slight advice, all the fun stuff, but I must say with these types it can be hard, but there were a few things that are mentioned throught the review and here aswell, this one seemed to not need too much but here is what i thought, anyways good luck, More inter-activity on this can be added so that the user has more stuff to do, there was not much of interactivity, there was some but more added would make it fun and more envolved by the user, Maybe more depth to the layout aswell would be nice just something to think about.

[Mittens]

Cute game "MITTENS" Cute

A decent flash here, I really like what you have here, there seems to be some good quality about all this and, i really like your style with this It was nicely done, There was alot of great value you gave to this flash, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, Ok so i gave this game a higher score then i normally do but i must say tis was a really "CUTE" game, i was not expecting the end but it came up pretty quick, so that was a plus, the "GRAPHICS" was easy and old-school. so that was another plus and made for another good entertainment value, there was only 3 medals, seems like you could have added much more on this one in medals, there could be maybe other adventures and so on. But anyways cute lil game you have here, So I found there to be Alot of great things in this Game, some could be better like some little details here and there, but not much but still some stuff could take a looking into as suggested of course, The game itself is pretty solid, but again need more attention, You have something good here, allthough it does need abit more, but really overall it was pretty balanced just needed abit more stuff, This was fun and entertaining of a game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggest some ideas and tips to better improve on a few Things, just some little stuff so hope some of these basics help or some stuff that i thought it might need, to make a better game, So hope to see some sort of improvments as this was a good game, and wouldnt mind seeing more to it. This game was neat but with so few medals why not add more adventures that way you can even add more medals just an idea though. It could be longer as it was a shorter game that i had expected. But anyways besides those idea it was a fun and cute game

[Why this?]

Decent game

I must say this was a pretty fantastic Game, for the mostpart it was a highly entertaining game, it kept my interest, and has some nice visuals and graphics that really came together, I like this because it had alot of good points some things could be worked on better, So great start to a decent flash game. Ok so this was interesting i like the "PIXLE" like game here, it adds to the quality and fun-ness of the game, his movment was kind of slow though, but i guess that could be the idea but it was actually pretty fun the "GRAPHICs" are simple but thats pixle for you, but i must say it was still a fun pleasent and amusing agme, and a good concept, the medals were far and few between so thats something you should work on adding more medals. I like the "CUT SCENES" in this as the story starts to show thru progression so in a way it slike a movie / game but all still good, And the "TIC-TOC" Medal was interesting but a long wait indeed, but anyways a decent flash game here with abit of a good movie part so that was pretty interesting. OK so while this reviews is almost comming to an end i found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good visuals and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all. So keep up the decent work i really enjoyed what you had here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made to this fine game, just a few here or there, and in the end it will make a better game with more quality to it. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this somewhat better, it never hurts to improve on stuff, even in the smallest stuff. Improving on stuff is always a Plus, so here are some decent suggestions on making things better, you should give them a try or atleast a thought into making some changes on the game. This was pretty fantastic with some of the medals you had, some easy and some moderate to heavy skill level, you should add more on moderate level of skill and really build up the more the better., speed up his movment a lil as it was too slow waling the main character, it was pretty good game.