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[Kikyo's Dress Up 0.3]

Good game here

Grat game here great idea and awsome idea with the mini game, So first i will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there.Ok so with this one i saw something differant, and that wa sthe little mini game to earn more items, that was the first time i seen that in any dress upgame, and that should actually be in more games to earn more items, but, you should have had more of the mini games for even more items as the itemsyou did have in this was just too few and even fewer inbetween, and then there was no backrounds thats another one you should add more backrounds and differant ones besides the purple ones and it wouldnt hurt to have a much larger view screen, more otems can be placed and more to see aswell better detail all around, so these are a few ideas and tips that would really improve on this decent flash game, And another tip might be adding some "MEDALS" to the game like with themini game part and thatmight actually work better, This was a decent flash, now ofcourse there were some things that could be better and fixed and such, stated a few of them above and some more tips added below, these tips should help to make it somewhat better if not maybe they will give you some ideas, but even if you didnt use any of these tips you have a decent idea here with this flash, i look forward to seeing much more of your work inthe near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, just a few tips to make things better. You should try and add some Medals to this flash its the perfect fit, not sure how you could match the two types but would give the game more quality and ofcourse some great replay value, something to think about.The one thing with this was the size of the screen or view screen, it was just kind of small and could be larger, that way you can add more stuff to it, larger screen just allows more creation for you and the player so give it a try besides it can makes the game have some more quality that way. Dress-up games like yours here are great and i love these types because you can be very creative, but when you dont have much to chose from you cant do much but a few basic stuff so add much more items and props, Also adding some items that have animated effects would also make it more unique aswell. So you do have a good dress-up game here, one of the things that could be improved on would be the backrounds its too plain or bland as some say, so as an idea why not have it colored, or add some nice flashy graphics to it, or even go forth and put even more effort by having a scene selector in there

[=Button Tutorial 2=]

Decent TUT Here

WEll first off thisis a decent flash entry, there was a few issues that could be worked on, ill explain that later but i must say you still did well and showed that you were putting in the effort and it shows, This had a nice style to it and i was having fun with this aswell, so nice job all together on this, and do lookforward on more from you like this entry. So the "BACKROUNDS" could use some more effort more change there, maybe the color base, This was a decent Tutorial, shows alot of basic and simple ways of tackling the task and thats what will be good for teaching a few people in need of learning the basics, Besides the backrounds the designs and graphics were really well take so nice effort on everything else there, The "MUSIC" seemed somewhat louder then usual so you may want to lower it just a tad, So the "TUTORIAL" itself is kind of on the basic side and will help new flashers, but maybe in the future you should include basic and advance tuts in the same flash so that you can cater to a more variaty of audiance, just a thought anyways, A decent game here I really enjoyed playing around with this, as there was some good vibes from this decent visuals, and somewhat of an entertainment value to this submission, but in the end i liked what you have presented here and was pretty good if you ask me, could use some more to it and such but thats for later, but anyways decent flash entry you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this is where i suggest a few ideas and improvments, cant always do that since some stuff is really good and right on tack, but with this one there was some good points and only a few points of suggestions for improvment, i have suggested a few ideas thruout the review including here, so just think about the ideas and just imrpve and make the weaker points stronger, in-turn commingout with an overall better outcime of an entry.Well ill start off with the backrounds they could use a differant color base, Lowering the sound quality would also be another tip of advice, And lastly but not least try and cater to more of a learning audiance, so the basic tuts are great but also include some more advanced tuts for both types of flash levels and so on.

[NG Audio Elevator]

Kinda like an Audio player

OK so how do i start off this review as these types of submissions tend to have me stumped, but they are still unique in there own way, they bring some nifty elements to the table, and theres alot to visualize among other things, so in general its a decent entry, it was alright in my eyes, There are things i wouldnt mind seeing changed for the better though. So some things that i really liked with this, It was "SIMPLE" and not complicated as some may tend to be with these audio player types, So i would have liked more "INTER-ACTIVITY" since its a game more interactivity by the user would be more enjoyble sine it is labled as a game and what not, just a thought though. The music portion of this is pretty neat like all audio players are and i do like that you have put some effort into it, wouldnt mind seeing it have even more effort so its not just like a media player but more of something differant aswell. The fact that this does promote other artists is another nice option, The layout and design of this was actually notbad, aswell as the graphics allthough could use more depth to them, But anyways other then things that have already been said i did think this was a unique flash entry, there are some improvments that can be made, but thats for later, But i got some fun and joy out of this and it was nifty messing with it, so overall a decent flash game here, but in the end could still use more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well as we come to the end of the entire review this is where i suggest a few ideas and tips and some slight advice, all the fun stuff, but I must say with these types it can be hard, but there were a few things that are mentioned throught the review and here aswell, this one seemed to not need too much but here is what i thought, anyways good luck, More inter-activity on this can be added so that the user has more stuff to do, there was not much of interactivity, there was some but more added would make it fun and more envolved by the user, Maybe more depth to the layout aswell would be nice just something to think about.

[Mittens]

Cute game "MITTENS" Cute

A decent flash here, I really like what you have here, there seems to be some good quality about all this and, i really like your style with this It was nicely done, There was alot of great value you gave to this flash, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, Ok so i gave this game a higher score then i normally do but i must say tis was a really "CUTE" game, i was not expecting the end but it came up pretty quick, so that was a plus, the "GRAPHICS" was easy and old-school. so that was another plus and made for another good entertainment value, there was only 3 medals, seems like you could have added much more on this one in medals, there could be maybe other adventures and so on. But anyways cute lil game you have here, So I found there to be Alot of great things in this Game, some could be better like some little details here and there, but not much but still some stuff could take a looking into as suggested of course, The game itself is pretty solid, but again need more attention, You have something good here, allthough it does need abit more, but really overall it was pretty balanced just needed abit more stuff, This was fun and entertaining of a game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggest some ideas and tips to better improve on a few Things, just some little stuff so hope some of these basics help or some stuff that i thought it might need, to make a better game, So hope to see some sort of improvments as this was a good game, and wouldnt mind seeing more to it. This game was neat but with so few medals why not add more adventures that way you can even add more medals just an idea though. It could be longer as it was a shorter game that i had expected. But anyways besides those idea it was a fun and cute game

[Why this?]

Decent game

I must say this was a pretty fantastic Game, for the mostpart it was a highly entertaining game, it kept my interest, and has some nice visuals and graphics that really came together, I like this because it had alot of good points some things could be worked on better, So great start to a decent flash game. Ok so this was interesting i like the "PIXLE" like game here, it adds to the quality and fun-ness of the game, his movment was kind of slow though, but i guess that could be the idea but it was actually pretty fun the "GRAPHICs" are simple but thats pixle for you, but i must say it was still a fun pleasent and amusing agme, and a good concept, the medals were far and few between so thats something you should work on adding more medals. I like the "CUT SCENES" in this as the story starts to show thru progression so in a way it slike a movie / game but all still good, And the "TIC-TOC" Medal was interesting but a long wait indeed, but anyways a decent flash game here with abit of a good movie part so that was pretty interesting. OK so while this reviews is almost comming to an end i found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good visuals and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all. So keep up the decent work i really enjoyed what you had here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made to this fine game, just a few here or there, and in the end it will make a better game with more quality to it. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this somewhat better, it never hurts to improve on stuff, even in the smallest stuff. Improving on stuff is always a Plus, so here are some decent suggestions on making things better, you should give them a try or atleast a thought into making some changes on the game. This was pretty fantastic with some of the medals you had, some easy and some moderate to heavy skill level, you should add more on moderate level of skill and really build up the more the better., speed up his movment a lil as it was too slow waling the main character, it was pretty good game.

[40 Optical Illusions 2]

Fun game

Wanted to say that the intro was a nice touch, i dont see much of that but when there is a menu page, intro page, but you really did some nice designs and such, gives the whole flash more depth and qulity so grats on a nice menu/intro page. Now i must say these types of game are fun, And thanks for the qualityoption that was pretty good, Ok so this was a pretty good game, i actually got a few of the medals wich was nice, the "DESIGN-LAYOUT" was kind of sloppy though and you should think about adding some more effort there as it was just kinda sloppy, So maybe as an improvment option a more fresher look more borders, maybe not so much use of random stuff either, It was a fun game though maybe make it "HARDER" aswell as this one seemed too easy i thought. and addinga few more medals wouldnt hurt aswell, well these are just a few ideas i hope they help, also one last thing, it was hard to click on some buttons mainly the "TEXT" only buttons like the "LOW-MED-HIGH" buttons that could be better looked at aswell, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot i can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and i liked everything i saw here, so keep up the good work. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok I will start off with saying this is actually pretty decent the flash has good potential, it does need some more work there, below are a few ideas that could make it better but does need your effort on this, So use some of the ideas it will greatly make this better and allow you to have more viewers to your flash aswell. So i suggested a few ideas, one being that the layout needs more of a better design and more fresh look and less random colors here and there. A great addition are medals to any flash, and i like the ones you had on here, allthough it could use much more medals, people on this site really love the medals and could really enjoy it more with some more medals, so give it a try it wont hurt.

BanglaBoy96 responds:

Thanks for the well written review :)

[Kirby Designer]

Kirby dress up notbad.

Ok so first off this was notbad, but it was more on the "PLAIN" side of things, the whole button style is ok but, it kind of limits the creativty of the dress up and anly allowing whats on the button selection, so if you allowd it as a drop and drag or even a snap on style, then theres more creativity to it, the button way just is too limited. I also noticed you didnt have any backrounds at all, thats one thing that really makes dress-ups even better is showing the dress up characters in there related format, so adding some sort of backround changer would be a great element for the game, somthing to try and wouldnt be that hard to set up. The items you did have were notbad but also limited so very few there, so add more "ITEMS" more varitay, and also some extra items with some sort of animated elements to them, animated ones will give it a unique feel aswell. This was notbad at all, pretty decent flash here, i enjoyed it from the get go, there are some things that could be worked on in order for it to be even better, dont get me wrong its pretty good as is but with some more extras it would be even better, but anyways decent flash i look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a pretty good flash if you ask me, but it couldbe better with a few suggestions and ideas, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. The whole button style is ok but, it kind of limits the creativty of the dress up and anly allowing whats on the button selection, so if you allowd it as a drop and drag or even a snap on style, then theres more creativity to it, the button way just is too limited. The items you did have were notbad but also limited so very few there, so add more "ITEMS" more varitay, and also some extra items with some sort of animated elements to them, animated ones will give it a unique feel aswell.

[Emo Pet:Dressup v2.0]

Hmm view screen kinda small

So i would start working on this abit more, its actually pretty good but there are a few things that can be improved like with the size of the view screen it was just too small for the detailed items and small items you have, So a larger view screen would be just right for this one, The "MUSIC" was great here, and the art and detail was prettygood, but to show off some of that stuff you want to add some more stuff, and with a larger view screen you can add more items, i have noticed you used the "DUPLICATION" idea and made alot of the same outfits except you just changed the color, thats ok but you need more random and unique stuff so make each one differant from the other. so in general everything should be bigger some stuff was too tiny to click on like the "SKIN COLOR" I really took a liking to this flash, and grew on me there was lots of nice stuff on this, and overall got a good feeling from it and was great to see, now ofcourse it could be better and with some more effort it can be just that, so hope soon to see more of this and much more of your work, anyways untill then keep it real. So anyways look forward to more of what you have in store for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a neat game here, It could be even better though because it was decent but withs ome fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. Now i have always enjoyed these types of games and i must say that this would have been much better and muchimproved with a much larger screen, it was more on the small side so didnt allow for much creation and the items kinda hurt for that, so as an improvment idea make the view screen larger. I have noticed you used the Duplication idea and made alot of the same outfits except you just changed the color, thats ok but you need more random and unique stuff so make each one differant from the other. Not to be picky but one of the issues i found in this one, was the lack of backrounds, the ones you had up there were abit on the bland side, have something that has something to do with the game content, do maybe an image, or some characters in art that are related to the main character or item. So theres a few ideas, they could help to improve on this decent game so give them or some of them a try.

[Create a Creature ll]

Decent game

First off you did a nice job on this the intro was great aswell, and second the music was spectacular really had a lot of quality to it and made this more enjoyble to this game, Now i can see why this is a knock off to dead babies dress-up games but you did change it up somewhat and thats important too, two things i didnt notice that you could have put in this was that there was no backrounds, just a blue one, and there was alot of items but there was no animated items so these ideas could make it even better and more differant from the dead baby series and something to try out, The items you do have on this are unique and differant and pretty impressive, and could use for some animated stuff, but you already know that, And soonce again this was a decent Flash i really liked what you presented, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, so with that said keep up the good work it was a pretty decent work of flash,hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is were i suggest a few ideas that could help to improve on this, hope it does help, and remember it can only make things better. Decent presentation of stuff and pieces here, it still could use more stuff though, thats where it lacked, So more items and props, and have some unique and colorful ones aswell. Some animation on the items would also be a plus.
Backrounds would be a plus on this, just the simple regular palate is ok but dressing up the backround with some scene from the character topic would be nice, or even just adding some sorta nice graphics in the backround would be pretty cool too. Anyways hope that helps, and hope to see an upgrade soon.

[Dress Up Sonic Hedgehog]

Sonic is cool

sonic is pretty cool, and this was a decent game, i did however think the viewscreen of it all was kinda small, so as an idea or tip here try making the palate or view screen much larger and bigger, and the hedgehog could of used more items of the hair type the blue spiky type of stuff so i guess you could call it hair but he needs more props of that, the backround was notbad, maybe some more added backrounds like on a selector of backrounds, and nice option on the music thats another area where you could add a cycle of music selections, After seeing and messing with this one i thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anywayskeep up the work i like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more. Anyways keep up the decent work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this is were I suggest some ideas and tips to better improve stuff, Your game is actually pretty good doesnt need much but could use a few things. the music thats another area where you could add a cycle of music selections, the hair type the blue spiky type of stuff so i guess you could call it hair but he needs more props of that, So as a tip or two, you could work on your backrounds more, what you have is ok but having the backrounds more enhanced with some sorta design would be one way, or some image in the backround that is somehow related to your game. so these idea and tips could make it a better game give them a try cant hurt at all, just a little more effort thats all.