XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tilez]

A puzzle game

So im not gonna be all Negitive here and there shouldnt be a reason to be Negitive, but i will suggest some ideas later, I actually thought this was Spectacular in its own right mind, It was pretty Loaded with some interesting ideas, So here you have an interesting game i like the whole puzzle like, and the idea was pretty basic, And the game is pretty straight forward go from a to b so a very good game here, even the "MUSIC" is pretty good i thought, the Graphics and visuals could be much better though, the grid could use a more sleeker design maybe more colors more design to it. so every puzzle was pretty easy except #15 as that was the trickiest. some sort of hint option, like level 25 is kinda even harder. Well I do look forward to seeing What else you have planned or chose to come up with your work is well showen and i cant wait to see what else comes up. but you do have something interesting and entertaining here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here was something i liked and i like your style of attacking it aswell, This was something that could be more Pollished though, even a Tweak or two all for the better good of the improvment stages, And all it really takes is some Substituting here and there, So as some advice on improving this you could really improve on it by improving the "visual grid" and overal greaphics, maybe some extra design on the grid and some extra shades and sharp details wouldnt hurt. maybe you should have some sort of "HINT" option if you get in trouble would make for a good feature.

[Chalkboard Pong]

Fun and fast

In todays world of flash you tend to see alot of the same of maybe this or maybe that, but what you have is is something thats different from the rest, your style, your effort, and your quality, so in that sense you have made it different for sure and even unique from the rest of what we tend to see. This was your classic pong but you added some style to it, i was upto 3/4 pong balls and it was already getting tough, i do apprecieate all the medals but there might be an issue or bug with them as they give all the medals at once, but anyways a fun and interesting game, pong at its best. I like this for a number of points, its good seeing flexible elements to this, you have also added some style, and quality to it, Wich is why i have enjoyed it as much as i have, keep up the quality efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So for the past ten plus years I have played some amazing games, not all perfect but nothing really is on here so with this improvment section I will suggest some possble improvments, I do hope you use them or some atleast they can be positive changes. You should make the medals a little harder, just a tad atleast.

[NG Advent Calendar 2012]

This one was pretty interesting

I have reviewed somany of these kinds of games from the worst to some average ones to the best ones out there, And this entry would be right up there, its not perfect but its notbad either, its pretty fun aswell as some good fun comes with this one. So this one was pretty interesting, and its festive so thats notbad, i didnt come along till late in the dates so i guess i missed some medals :( but it was still a fun little game, it was very artistic with all the art sizes and such, but overall this was a good game and good easy medals aswell. With this entry you put up some smiles on the viewers, and your concept of this game really shines good, and so with that said just keep making these awsome game types it brings us all fun, pleasure, and good entertainment.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have sprayed the most interestung stuff through-out this flash, mostly good, I guess there is a few things you could do to make it better, so here are options and ideas. Maybe after its all said and done you can make it so people can go back and achieve some of those older medals somehow.

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

Please don't review my stuff anymore, Wayne, cos you never say anything of value.

Take for example this review: "There is a few things you could do to make it better" ... but then you say absolutely nothing about how it could be improved.

[AVOIDAL]

Very fun and addictive

No Lackluster areas of this one, but there are some points that could be improved and such, You still have a good Representation and a very Acceptable flash with good standards, so with this i was pretty impressed, Haha ok i have has some major fun with this game its intense it reallymakes you think and its simple, the graphics are alright but its the whole concept of the game that makes this very fun and a fun experience, as i play it gets pretty tough its still fun though and i think you have done a fantastic job here with some nice effects and combos, i wouldnt mind some easier medals like play for an amount of time or some earlier stage medals. I admit that I wasn't too interested in this at first, but it certainly got better as it gets deeper, so nice ideas here. and i can see this even doing more with some small adjustments here and there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have lots of Contributions towards making this pretty good, Maybe i have a few ideas that could be tossed around here and there, And by Instituting some of the ideas that i will suggest in a bit some easier medals like low level then progress upto some other higher medals would be a nice touch.

[Alphaland]

strange game

You have Established something really interesting here, among other things i found this to be, Groovy and even somewhat, Swanky, but the most i would call this would have to be Spectacular, so you have a pretty good loaded game here, OK so the idea seems fun and interesting but i found this game to be kind of strange it was alright, i was kind of lost, maybe if you threw in some sort of hints that would guide it would helpwithall the confusion, The graphics well they were just as they were, but you do have a good concept here with an interesting "EXPLORING" touch so i did have fun just wish there was less confusion. I couldn't help but be entertained by this. While it was not as good as some other stuff, it was still very interesting And While it didn't have a lot of crazy stuff going on, it still had great Feel and element to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There was a little Frustration getting started here on some improvment points, because you did such a great job sofar, But there could be some possible Substituting here and there, Some things that could be made better would be options and features that like a possibly hint or tip feature in the game would be a real plus.

[Anaksha Mini Adventures 2]

Fun and interesting medal game

This was pretty interesting, I like the idea of this and i like how you presented this, It was pretty interesting though, there are a few things that you could change up now and then but ill get on that later, but now more into the review. ok so i found this game to be pretty interesting i really like that you have alot of medals, the game is filled with lots to find and experience, The graphics are pretty impressive and the "MUSIC" is soothing and fits well with the game, so nice effort here and a well playedout game very worth the while and a fun overall experience i thought, so as for improvments not sure but it had alot already. Wow, I think this may in fact be my favorite entry for the days finds in the portal. It's really cool how you have all this great style and nifty ideas. you should realy advance on those ideas for more success.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like all the Contributions you have pushed forward on this one, some were unexpected, I have some ideas for you and if Implementing correctly you could add an extra notch of quality here, I have Pinpointed a few areas that could see some light and attention, But i suppose some extra effects like when you find stuff, even a small bonus mini game would be great, but other then that this was an alright game.

[AV: The Pixel Lord]

Fun game, kinda tricky

This is a nice game. The graphics are decent and the gameplay is nice as well. but you added your own ideas and thats what i really liked here, and while it could use some more, it was a good start of a game. Haha the "YOU-LOSE" medal was the easiest yet it was funny aswell, and its kinda neat that you added some sound to go along with it, so that alreay makes it kind of "UNIQUE" so nice job there on adding something differant. so more shades and detail could be added like to the ship and backrounds, Now that i think about it im getting tited of the YOU/LOSE one hehe its all in good fun, this is one of those games that make you mad but also its makes you happy so its all in good fun, anyways good game. It's cool to see how ideas and themes is used. I love it when and artist uses his or her full potential. As you have with this one. And i know you have the skills because you have produced such a fine piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So for a game you have a decent submission, there was not a whole bunch that could be improved but i believe i have found a few items here and there that you ould work on, Some things seemed like they were abit overused But maybe you could experiment abit The "GRAPHICS" could use more detail, like the ship could use some shine and shades to it, As an extra option of effect you can have some blinking stars, so that it gives off a real effect of some stars.

[Aura.]

Differant and fun

Well, this is another game to take up most of my time over some good time. I'm glad, as I'll really be able to get my teeth into it and understand this from the ground up. You have something differant here, the game is addictive and interesting its kind of hard at some points as you have to really keep tha "BALL" going and when you have to switch into differant phases and colorsit really gets touch, it was fun though and it was alot better then i had expected so nice effort and good game, keep up the unique games you have here. I thought this was a decent flash. I guess I was just expecting something more epic with that But Of course, I have to give you credit for using such cool Elements and ideas. there could be some tad more tings added here and there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Games are kind of a tricky thing sometimes they need some improvment changes and sometimes they are ok as is, Sometimes all it takes is a few changes even Substituting here or there helps in a big way A small Investment could make for a big project, I wouldnt mind seeing more "FLASHY" effects to give it more visual effects that will push it to some nice effects and stuff like after level get or something

[Attack of Heavenly Bats]

Fast paced

I don't mind playing games that are difficult. The harder a game is, the more profound the feeling of accomplishment when you succeed. With this game, I had a decent time and didn't mind any of the littel struggles that the game does bring but that was also all the part of the game and what makes it entertaining. Alright this was like a mario/sonic game very fast paced and the coins are fun theres lots to do the game controls were kinda fast, This game was highly "ADDICTIVE" and also reminded me of "ZELDA" with all the hearts and all, a very good game some good music to fit well with so i was really impressed and really got into this game so very nice game here it will go as one of my faves, So its been awhile since a medal game has kept my interest as this one has, so great job, you should have added much more medals though seems like you should have had alot more for this type of game. so i have been playing the game for a good hour its that addictive and fun this is the type of game that needs some sort of "GUIDE" you should change the "CONTROLS" around so that its better access like i noticed you had "JUMP" as the "Z" keye wich could easily be done with the up arrow key. and with the end boss that was the hard part so overall a good game. I loved the graphics in this one. I feel it was some of your best. that i have seen sofar, but for the mostpart it was pretty good, nice and clean graphics that really came off well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So it has come to this area i like to suggest some new ideas and even sometimes some older ones but its all for the good cause of the project, Some of these ideas can really be Utilised and may not be your Preference,but do have alot of Potential, Adding much more medals for tis game would be a great improvment, You should think about adding a guide or some hints for this game. The up arrow key would be a better choice for jump

[Another Ragdoll]

needs some fixing

I had a really good time playing this game. Really easy to pick up. I didn't grasp right away but after some time on this game it was pretty interesting and kept me interested for a good while, i like this game and like your style and direction This was what seemed like a fun game, and i like the idea and all, but there was lacking alot of stuff like "CONTROLS" there wasno describing how the game works or what the tricks are to acheiving the medals, so they didnt really seem like they worked at all, it would have been nice to have more information on how things worked and maybe some tips and ideas on how to get the medals, these are things that could generally make the game alot better for everyone. Today you have amazed me with all that you bring to the portal, Especially with this piece today, your work today is savvy with hard work and great talent, So thank you for all the hard work and effort you put forward.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
How can we make something better that doesnt need much, infact probably doesnt need any improvments at all, But i will take a stab at the and and try and point out a few ideas including any weak points i may have saw on the game entry. So as suggested needs some guidlines and tips of advice especially some instructions on how it works or even how to acheive higher scires and whatnot.