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[Ashley Journey]

Decen dress-up game

What are the right words, Swanky and Groovy come to mind, And here i am reviewing another one of these fantastic submissions, now dont get me wront there are some things that could use more effort and you could change some stuff, but for the most part i like what you got going on here. Its Loaded with fantastic elements, and hope to see more of the same soon. A fun dress-up game you have, it was simple and i like the click on an item and it snaps on that was pretty nifty, so i have seen and played alot of these games and they are prettyinteresting i like the effort you have been putting fourth some effort in this one with lots ofitems, backrounds and even some music so nice job on this one. as for improvment not sure since you covered all the basics. You have A fun flash game, some good positive results here, graphics could be better and there could be some extra effort on stuff, but overall it was pretty entertaining, Besides some little extras, could be Rejuvinated with some extra touces and ideas though. just some little things and cleaning up, but overall it was a pretty entertaining flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, Because it does have Potential So here are just a few Constructive tips to make things better. So Put in some of that effort and run with it. andlet it show its quality, younever know but you do have something good here. I would like to see more variaty, i know you have alot of stuff already but maybe making some more random and unique stuff like goofy and odd hats and gloves and whatnot, that would be a plus onthis one.

[[SG] Dress Up Shades Gang]

Too basic

This is Groovy, and Spectacular, you gave a Positive light on this, There wasnot much unnecessarily Negitive points either, You have pushed the ideas forward and have come up with something interesting, ultimately this can be even better, and i love how you made everything work and come alive, it was pretty entertaining for the most part. Theres alot of dress-up game more then i can count, but i do have to say it was "CUTE" with yours here but it was too "BLAND" aswell, needed more clothing and prop options, Posibly a larger view screen, even some "BACKROUNDS" would sufice, but this game was too bland and too basic and does need some upgrading, more style more items but most of all needs more effort on your part to make it jump out, even throw in some idea that are not in other dress-ups for something differant and unique. Entertaining flash game here, it had some nice options and features kept me interested and was not boring, all though there are still some improvments that can be made, But anyways with all that said this was a pretty decent flash again had all the elements thats makes up something good and amusing so i was pleased with this, so props to you on something decent here, hope to see improvments soon, as this has lots of potential, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are various ways you can make this better i have even suggested a few ideas, Some stuff can be Utilised better of you should utilise new ideas to the best that you can, Focus on the strong points weak points of the game so that there is more balance throughout it, So i suggest a few ideas and tips here hoping that it will only make things better for your game, So try some or all of the tips and ideas out, and let your flash shine even more. Adding more items and clothing choices would be first on mind a canvus and then adding some backround choices would be a big change for the better.

[Potato Man Dressup v.3]

Notbad of a game

Everything in this has Processed very well and effectively, it was Acceptable, no i take that back, infact it was Spectacular and i didnt find much Lackluster areas maybe one or two but that could easily be worked on, but you do have some nice work here and it can only get better from here on out so nice job overall, hope to see more. This particular game kind of reminds me of the "DEAD-BABY" dress-up games, but also reminds me of a mexican man dress-up game lol wich are funny, but anyways this was notbad could use more items more props, i do however like the randomness of it all with there being some unique designs and all, and speaking of designs you should think about adding a border to the window screen seems abit plain. The flashing backround was alright but also seemed to get anoying so maybe thats also something that can be changed out aswell, So not to bore you any furthure with this review, But anyways you have some good work here allthough some more effort for better improvment could be done for an overall effect, and better outcome, Its not perfect but is ok for what you did supply in content, so on that part of stuff it was notbad at all. So a good flash well worth the while, some great effort here put fourth, untill next time keep the creativity flowing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Before i get into improvments and updating any lacking areas, I just want to say that you have a good game here it kept me interested and was not boring by any means, There is allways room for improvment and while your flas was pretty decent there were a few stuff and details that could have some slight more effort, but i must say there is always room for some kind of improvment. add backrounds and add more items, also add a border around the edges of the canvus these would all be plusses on this kind of games.

[Alien Creator]

Nice style

Well well here was something good from the portal, and while it does seem to need some improvments and a few suggestive ideas, I will elaborate more on that in the review if it needs any help at all, as it was a pretty good start to a flash entry, so i do look forward to what else you can do with this, but lets move along to this interesting flash works you do have here. I like the style of game here while it is a dress-up you gave it alot of elements that people usually miss, so that was a plus, you gave this game life with good "CREATIVITY" i like all the variaty in planets, allthough in each planet there should be more props and clothing and stuff, more random stuff aswell, So my take on this game you did well, could use more variaty of items but was a decent and fun game. This game was alright, not perfect but does have some decent entertainment to it and i played it a few times so it also brings in some re-play value and thats something you dont get alot of in these types of game, So You a have a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself. so hope others enjoy it aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can improve on this, So use some of these ideas, even as basic as some may be but in the end your flash will be much better for it. So i got alot of good from this flash it was amazing actually, But also So think about some of the ideas suggested in the review. But anyways hope to see some more work from you, and hope to see some updates aswell, as this game was really fun and would love to see it continue on. more items is needed ofcourse, so other then that this was actually notbad.

blowtoons responds:

Thanks a lot XwaynecoltX! great review!

[AdVaNcE DrEsS uP 2]

Kinda simular to the first one

I really like these types of flash games as they tend to take some time, I thought you showed some good effort and the outcome seems to show off that time and energy put in so props to you there, nice job indeed, There are some areas of improvment and it would really make this an all around flash entry so something to think about there. So i cant give this much of a higher score then the first version, but i will grade you on the effort and creativity of it, So you basicly have no changes except for maybe a girl version, now as i explained in the other ones you need some adjustments, like thinner lines brush stroke tool not so thick on the character and prop outlines. also adding a larger canvus will help since you had such a small areas to work with, it will also help to add more items aswell, and some sort of backround sthat change or the user can change would be a nice option aswell, these are all things i have mentioned in the first one but could still be used here, other then that this was notbad. And here is another interesting game, it has alot to offer and has some potential aswell, I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really liked the effort you put into this but it also still can improve, A few improvments could be done here I have posted a few ideas that could really make this flash take off, I have some advice on a few things here and they are posted throughout the review but they are all some needed improvments to your flash that will make it much more enjoyble for your fans, and anyone who views and or plays this game. backrounds would be a plus here, Aswell as more items and more of a canvus like too it, Make thinner lines brush stroke tool not so thick on the character and prop outlines.

[Aquarium Dress Up]

Nice game

Alright you have a delightful and Divine piece of flash work here, its not all the time that you can find such unique entries and i am glad i have found something of interest here today, Now ofcourse theres room to make things better and some slight improvment, I will elaborate on that later though, and how effectively you may push improvments. Sofar i like the "MEBU-PAGE" it was fresh and very inviting as a game should so it does show the interest that it should, but i must say the "GAME-PLAY" is much to be desired for like you just click on objects and it changes to a new item or color patteren, that sort of takes away the creativity as that a drag and drop style canoffer, so why not add a darg and drop style over the click and change option it will allow for more creativity, the music was fresh and interesting and made it for pleasent. And here is another interesting game, it has alot to offer and has some potential aswell, I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is lots of room for improvments, just a few things here and there, but the extra effort would really improve on this and make it better and a great game overall, Dont get me wrong its pretty good as is, but could stand for a few more enhancments, and will only make things better. so give some of these ideas a shot and let the flash comeout nice. Add a drag and drop option, kind of style like the old drag and drop.

[Arri dress up]

Interesting dress-up

You have Engineered something very Professional here something delightful, and something of good interest here, i was glad to have found this, And i didnt find anything that was lacking or anything like that, So Eliminating anything to take away from this would be out of the question, you do have a good entry here and i look forward to seeing more of this and your work. So this was not a bad game i actually like and review alot of these types of games, and while this one does show some good effort, i think you did more of a copy and past style of stuff, you need more creative items, you need more random stuff, and more unique props and such, i do however like the "SNAP-ON" option that was someting differant, also adding some music, would be another nice touch. Ok so with all that said and done, there was some good parts in this flash entry, there were some parts that could be better on your end, but again i must say for the most part of this it was notbad at all, just needs some changes here and there, But you have something decent and something to go with for something even better on the next run

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving is always a plus, and So im here to try and suggest some good points, and hope they do get some consideration, and only say that because they could help to make this more fantastic then it already is, so here are some suggestions. but i like what you have here, hope to see some more qaulity and improvment come along soon. So you can Make it your own dress-up with your own unique twist and style, Add Some backrounds, Also i think you could add some music to this it just seems kind of bland without it. just some things to think about.

[Ashley Tisdale Dress Up]

A fine dress-up game

So my Initial reaction was that one differant by the end of the flash, This Contains some good visuals and content that was Loaded with some excitment, It was very Acceptable of being a great flash entry, it Thrived on all the elements and was a top notch submission and i was glad i had a chance to check this one out and look forward for more of your works soon. So you have a fine dress-up game here, it had lots of nice and detailed items and props, one thing this could use that was lacking was that there was no music, youcould easily add lots of music variaty, but anyways the items were pretty good, maybe adding some other types of items, i wouldnt mind seeing more random items. So a good start to a game with some nice options And some decent visuals, You really know how to use the flash program effectively and it shows, and you do it in moderation so thats some more effort and skill thats hows well on your side, Cant wait to see whatelse you are capable of im pretty sure it will be just as good as this one if not better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So You have a neat game entry here, There was some nifty and Clever Things about it thruout the flash, There was a few various unnecessarily things here and there, and some cluttered areas,So maybe those are some areas to Focus on, But It could be even better though because it was decent but with some fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. So there were a few things that could make this better, 1 being there was nomusic, and 2 you could add more random items, more goofy items more creative ideas.

[Ashley Tisdale Makeover]

This game was interesting

I really love these types of game submissions, while thy dont get the recognition they deserve, but they are interesting and unique in there own way and do deserve some extra points, now thats ofcourse if you put in the effort, but as for this one, I found it to be pretty Spectacular, and had some interesting points but could be better in some ways. Another good dress-up here, and by now i have seen alot of these, this one had some extras that you normally dont see and such, but the items while in dress-up mode are far too small you need a close up, and there was no music or sound/fx, so those are a few things that could be worked on, but other then that this was actually notbad at all. A decent game here most of this was pretty good And you showed some nice effort here, The game was was good and thats not to say it may need some more work but that may be suggested later, But some good effort was put fourth and was pretty good i thought, keep at it and keep making facinating stuff like this, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all good Flash you have here, Theres a few things that could have some Ironing out just little stuff though, and its the little stuff that will propell this flash even farther,So you do have a good Project here but some areas and elements can be Utilised much better and more efeciently, so anyways here are some tips and advice that can help improve on your flash entry her So with this one i noticed there was no music or sound option unless i missed something, also the items were too small so maybe making the screen much larger and making the items much larger aswell.

[Ashley's Dress Code]

This one was alright

You have Established a good submission here with this entry, and with a good and Positive attitude and good direction you really have brought out the good in this, Infact i Realized it was more Spectacular then i thought so nice job there and with some more efforts in the right direction i can see this going even father as it has lots of potential. This dress-up was alright nothing too special here i do like the going on a trip and packing up options and the music was notbad, but it was pretty decent, the props and items were ok, allthough there could be more random and unique styles, but other then that this was a pretty basic type of dress-up. A decent Game here, i was surprised with some of the nice options it had, but that brought more to the table, so nice effort there, OK so while this reviews is almost comming to an end I found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good Graphics and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all. but with that said hope to see more of your work especially if its like this, but anyways great job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Really like what you have presented here, You Delivered A decent flash game, You have shown in this submission that it has alot more Potential So i say keep rolling with it to make it a top quality submission already more then it is, So here are some ideas and tips It could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse that should help on making this better, Hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already. There are a few things that could make this better like, Change to drag n drop, Add more random and unique items, add more animated stuff in general.