Awsome
I played the other one and this was pretty good too I think even adding a bit of color would be a plus, I don't really know what to make of this. Part of me feels like it was pretty interesting and just sick in a few parts, and then the other part shows that it has a unique and soft touch. but you have done a swell job on this piece. I didnt find anything really negitive about this and you left a good Impression here so nice job.
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