XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kavo goes to the Factory]

differant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good little game very original and the first i seen like this so props to you there, but there are a few things you could fix up, first of all "BACKROUNDS" you should add a backround scene or something the white
backround is just very bland, and 2nd "ANIMATION" make your little stick character be animated like when he is on the crane thingie

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I pointed out a few tips, backrounds, more character design, hope this will help you to make a much better flash

~~OVERALL~~
Its differant but notbad at all

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[Horny Scarecrow]

A pleasent flash

~~REVIEW~~
A nice and pleasent flash here, sound was even good, allthough i wouldnt mind seeing some subtitles, but all n all

it was pretty good. the subtitles is not an big issue but its a nice feature to have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add some differant scenes , like take it into differant scenes, and some subtitles would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
A pleasently good flash here

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[The Rock Defeated?]

Very short

~~REVIEW~~
It was very short maybe too short, but i did get a giggle out of this, maybe to improve add some more killing options, a "KNIFE" An "AXE" other "GUNS" etc. so by adding a few adjustments as i suggested, will greatly make this much more enjoyable, some things to think about next time around, good luck regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i said some other guns would have been the right choice, now just work on them

~~OVERALL~~
Could use a few details, hope my tips help

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[MI v1.0]

silly game but still neato

~~REVIEW~~
Heh a silly game here but it was fun and cute, and did i forget to say silly hehe i liked it, the "MUSIC" was really good, ifact i believe the music really flowed well with the content of this game, the game itself could use more content and more stuff to do actually but anyways nice game

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make another version but add more content, keep the music and add much more to do as interactivity, it was a decent game though

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing little game, needs more content

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[diogoshx flash tutorial]

A decent tutorial

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm a decent tutorial here, its rather simple, kinda too simple but it does show the basics and you presented the tutorial in a simpple way in which may help newer people learning flash, i was not fond of the buttons though, maybe give some sleeker design of buttons or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some sleeker buttons maybe some borders/frames to give it a more fresh look to it as i thought it was sorta on the simple side

~~OVERALL~~
nice tutorial here

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diogoshx responds:

oO

thank you very much!

glad you like

remeber that was my 1º tutorial...

i am Learning to improve with the reviews! :D

[Battle for Mars]

Decent shooter game

~~REVIEW~~
Good shooter game you have here, it has some nice code, its "FAST" and theres lots to shoot at and has some good graphics, a good fast play of a game and moves along fairly quicly i really enjoyed this, maybe you should make a frontal view of this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it so the enemies are coming at you "THE SCREEN" might make for a more fun game

~~OVERALL~~
Fun shooter easy to handle

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[Daymare Town 3]

Neat game

~~REVIEW~~
Neat game, i think it lacks some color though, having abit of color here and there in odd spots would really bring out the visuals abit, the game itself is pretty entertaining and lots to see, i really enjoyed it and hope to see much more alot like this game from you, anyways good luck on your next one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color just in some odd places here and there

~~OVERALL~~
A new and fun kinda game

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[Design Collection]

A good dress-up

~~REVIEW~~
A decent dress-up here infact its a really good one, its differant how you set it up with the heads and all, the "ART" was lacking some detail and texture color, but you really do have something here, i made a few of my own dress-ups and this one here was notbad at all, so i suggest make some more of this with some improving on the art and textures

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
work on adding abit better art detail and texture in colors maybe a few shades here and there will help on this

~~OVERALL~~
A good game i thought

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[God of Circles]

Really fun game

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i was really impressed with this game, the game play with all the chains and hands was an awsome liitle killing device the enemies were not too much trouble maybe they need to be tougher, i also like the little vases and options for power ups, really welldone on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more options and make the enemies more tougher

~~OVERALL~~
A really fun and differant kinda game here that we all will learn to enjoy i know i did

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