XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Adventure Game Land]

Interesting and fun game

~~REVIEW~~
Now i didnt expect so much from this game, but you presented it very well, and you showed alot more then expected as i said, This had a somewhat of a story that seemed to workout well, and some good little action, i enjoyed what you had here for us, The "GRAPHICS" were fresh and cute and had a nice feel to it something that really flow along with eachother and such, some of the things i was abit confused with such as the dragon and the princess? not so sure what was needed there, but other then those two things it was pretty fun game and has a cute style to it, The animation was cute aswell like i said it was all a cute flash/game here and i was highly entertained, on how you can improve on this, i would suggest some more action stuff happening, and also make sure everything wroks before its presented before the public, but anyways a good game here i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more cute characters and more action happening

~~OVERALL~~
So overall a good and cute game that i think everyone will enjoy

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[The Maths quiz]

This game is abit bland

~~REVIEW~~
You have a good game here, but does tend to get abit bland, you could really spice this up though, like i noticed just all black and white, try adding some color like colored backrounds, some nifty colored buttons along with some nifty effects from the buttons, but it really does need some color, maybe even a better layout seems like you kinda just threw this one together in a short time, i bet some "FRAMES/BORDERS" around the edges woyld also spice this up some, and aslo for the quizz itself, it could be much better the questions were ok but sometimes it seems like the questions are off and such, more thought out questions would be a better choice i think, anyways better luck next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color is needed for sure, also better looking buttons along with some effects and last but not least some better questions

~~OVERALL~~
A fun short quiz game, simple and entertaining

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[america off-line]

This was fun i see some improving needed

~~REVIEW~~
The graphics were not the best but the game itself had a somewhat fun style and you did have some ok animation here so notbad, so ofcourse the graphics art style need more detail little shades more sketchty feel to it might even work, add more of that fun style i was talking about to keep the game balanced and fun for the players

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I said to work more on some detail points of the art and such, but still maintaining the skill fun of the game

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game can bet better still needs some art detail

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[Dormshit]

This was neat

~~REVIEW~~
A fun game here kinda silly and lots of options you had for it, i thought the artwork could be slightly better maybe a few little details more here and there like with backrounds and such, but other then that i enjoyed it, just try and work more on some detailed artwork and it should be fine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well like above the art needs some detail especially backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
It was neat but needs more effort

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[Pixel Basher]

Fun game

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat game, kinda unique in the way you {POWER-UP} it was differant yet you made it original and fun to play, its not the best game i have played but for sure a good one that im sure people will come back to play time and time again, so nice job on bringing us something nice and differant to play, The {GRAPHICS} are really good i like the little detail you have added in these really making them something to enjoy and the game itself was not laggy at all so that was a pluss to see awsome graphics and little to no lagg so nice job therethe {EFFECTS} were even better there was lots of after effects and really just made it more realistic and fun to see, the game play of the game was pretty easy to handle and play so nice job all around on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a fun game here i can see you making it last longer but other then that its alright

~~OVERALL~~
A fun and amusing game great work here

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[Easter egg painter]

Needs more Excitment

~~REVIEW~~
You have a decent game here but for the most part of it it starts to get abit on the "STALE" side so you may want to rework this game abit so that the viewers are not so confused and wanting something more entertaining, you actually have a decent layout and a color sheme going so ill give you credit for that portion

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Why dont you add some mini games with the eggs level completion it will spice the game up just abit

~~OVERALL~~
Decent game needs more excitment

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[Uniwar Level 2]

Lots of action

~~REVIEW~~
Lots of action in this one, i really like how you put some decent action that really made it come tjrough alolt, and lots to see i really liked that, the graphics were ok but seemed fitting for when it was made, but anyways good work here, hope to see more of your work soon but as for this one you did a pretty good job. keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make a land version like when you get out of the ship or something that might be something neat

~~OVERALL~~
lots of action in this one

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[doors 3000]

That was nifty

~~REVIEW~~
A nifty game with the computer and all, but the backrounds could use more detail, also more options wouldnt hurt, more like computer looking stuff so it has a more realistic feel to it and all, an idea there, so try and improve on this with more stuff that you would normally see, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more reslistic looking computer stuff

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining gadget like thing

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[Heads : Avatar maker]

Enetrtaining design

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now not sure if it was me but did this have {SOUND} you could ad some sound/fx and or even some music to it, it will brighten it up byfar, and that would be a step in the right direction, and its something to tryout, and i say that since you do know of the {AUDIO-PORTAL} just another thing to think about, All the differant designs and patterens was a neat thing and i wanted to see more of that, lots of differant combonations, im not all that into math but this was really fantastic. But other then that it was really impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can improve by adding more combinations and differant layouts and such

~~OVERALL~~
decent designs in this one

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