Cool
So with this one it was a bit slow but maybe it was more of a test on your part seems like so much more could be added to this one as it does have some nice sounds and while it was short still brings on some unique twists i think if it was a tad longer and sped up might be even better, but regardless this was pretty good of a sound piece you have created here so nice efforts.
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As suggested
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