XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Basicbeat11]

Ad a few more beats with this one

~~REVIEW~~
well you are right it is a simple short, its great as a loop, for my im more into the longer tunes , but as for this loop, it could be part of some action scene i could see, i am really glad to see alot of your stuff being used in flash movies and games so props to you for that, but anyways this was a nice little beat, if i could suggest anything it probably would be to add more beats in with the ones you already got, but thats just me liking the longer stuff, but anyways it was a good beat i look forward to hearing more of your stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few more drum beats would be nice.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Suspense]

Nice end effect

~~REVIEW~~
This one hasa darker feel and with the {GUN-SHOT} at the end, makes for a good loop to use in other flashes, so that was a nice touch with the gun shot, i wouldnt mind it being a tad {LONGER} though kinda have it build up to the gunshot and that may even give a much better end result for flashes and this little loop of yours, just an idea though, but a good one i think, i am even thinking maybe the gun shot should be abit louder aswell. something to try out i suppose, anyways good work on this one, nice end result to.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a more louder gunshot would be nice, and also abit longer in the buildup

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Newer]

Nice and fresh

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this is actually a pretty catchy tune, i like how you gave this lots of freshness and just a kicking song here, i had thought i had reviewed all your stuff guess not, but anyways, this was a good track {LOOP} or something i am not sure if i heard the other version but i will so i can see how it changed and stuff, but anyways this was pretty nifty and {CUTE} so props to you on a wonderful track or loop, wish it was a tad longer. And neat i tottally forgot this was used in a movie i took part in hehe nice work, anyways nice job and keep up the neat tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and keep it fresh as you do have

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Undone [Final]]

Awsome quality

~~REVIEW~~
First off great job on the high quality of sounding track here, i was not even expecting vocals but you did and it was also presented in very high quality, so awsome work there, The voice is pretty good, and with the nice tune in the backround it makes for a good flow, a suggestion might be to speed up the tempo of the vocals at times, sometimes when its going slow you can hear some skips or something, but thats nothing really, i liked this track and good vocals, with nice backround music, so nice job there, bbut like said before, maybe speed up the temp just abit, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested speeding up the tempo abit. other then that its pretty awsome.

~X~

djnet responds:

Thanks...im a sucker for slow emo songs...lol

[Whatever...]

Good guitar sounds

~~REVIEW~~
Here was a good kicking track, i loved the feel of this with the "DRUMS" and even guitar, and fantastic job on the guitar, it seems at times you can hear some scratchyness, but overall it was a pretty good sounding track, you really gave this some vibe, and i could really see myself being there at some concert so nice job there and props to you on a great piece, now if i can help on suggesting any improvments, i would suggest possibly, have some vocals so it really is complete, also look into any of the scratchyness i heard, anyways nice track here, Hope to hear from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some scratchyness could be looked into, and maybe adding some vocals could make it more complete

~X~

carlitozsx56686 responds:

Thanks for the review, XwaynecoltX. I will try to fix that scratchyness on my future works, and trying vocals, because I'm not a good lyricist lol.
Thanks again!

[Midnight Shadows (WiP)]

It can be great if finished

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well this was somewhat differant, it starts out super soft and then starts to build up, but then it gets cut off, i guess thats what you mean a "WORK-IN-PROGRESS" now i dont find anything wrong with that, its just i was getting into it and you did build up the song, so it was kind of a dissapointment when it cuts off, now i do hope you make a full version of this as it does seem to be something of good quality, so be sure to let me know if you ever do finish it, now for suggestions of improving, hmmm well first off dont cut it off like that haha, anyways keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Finish the track ofcourse that would be a plus, give from what i did get to hear it was perfect now just needs that finishing touch you got.

~X~

Step responds:

Yep, I actually asked in the Audio Forums for people to help me out with this. There's a good buildup, but then I'm not sure if I can reach the powerful and epic part after the buildup on my own, so I'm having a few people help me :D.
Glad you like it!

[Generic Rock Idea (WiP)]

Notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i decided to review some of your more current stuff, but i do like to hear ones older stuff before the newer stuff to see how one has improved, now this one here you have is notbad at all, the sound quality seems abit low, could just be me, but i like this sound, it has a good kick to it, there some drums and a guitar so thats pretty neat, guitar being my fave, but anyways this has a nice flow of track, and i did find myself enjoying it, its not matelica but its still pretty good, anyways nice job. im more of a classic rock person so if you have any of that i would love to hear some, as for this piece awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing major and it could be me, but sound seemed slightly low, but like i said not a biggie.

~X~

Step responds:

Well, I have Cobra which is Classical Rock, but I'm not sure if it's exactly Classical Rock. If you like Orchestral instruments with rock drums then you'll like it.
I think the drums were pretty good in this too ^^.
Thanks for the review, as always! :D.

[Distant Seas Loop]

Differant but interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another good beat from you, the backround tune sounds familular though, some game ? cant figure it out though, now with this track there seemed to be alot of the same beat or too much in one area you might want to shorten that up abit so that there is actually differant mixes of sounds throughout it all, dont get me wrong its differant and i like it, it just needs abit of variaty, and not the same throughout the track, maybe add some "CHIMES" in the backround tune like every now and then to spice it up here and there, again just a thought to change things up, anyways nice job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained it needs something that changes it up so it doesnt sound the same all the way through, i suggested some chimes or something

~X~

Step responds:

Haha, why are you reviewing all my old songs? xD.

Anyway, yeah, I doubt I'll change this, but as usual, you're completely right. It sounds empty and boring and needs more synths, but this was my first song using FL Studio :P. Thanks for reviewing!

[The 10 and a half heroes]

Could be louder

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this one was notbad but the sound "QUALITY" seemed abit low on it had to turn up the volume just abit, but anyways this was a differant track compared to some of the other ones i have heard, the piano is pretty good, but seems like you have a more slow tone going with this one, not a bad thing just something differant, i do think you should have differant spikes of higher tones now and then just to spice it up abit, but overall it was notbad and kind of a nifty little toon, kinda reminds me of finaal fantasy abit, but anyways another ok track i thought, not the best but ok, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spike up some keyes now and then higher pitches would be nice, just once and awhile.

~X~

Step responds:

Yep, you're definititely right. Again, this is one of my really really old tracks, so I wasn't so good back then. I agree with you about making it more high pitched and more interesting, it's definitely quite boring as it is now.

Actually I think this is one of my worst tracks :P.

Thanks for the review, again :D.

[Turning The Pages]

another decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another good track, and really nice work with the piano, you really seem to know what you are doing here with the keyes once again, and i also like the mixture and variaty that it sometimes has, so props to you there on that aspect of things, also enjoy how you do try and make a song out of it and such, the "PIANO" work seems to be my fave, I dont review much audio but i am becoming a fan of your work, so i hope theres lots of goodies in your other works, now as to improve on this one, i would suggest adding more changes when new sounds come in, something that would just really change up the tone of things, but thats more just me, overall its pretty good stuff, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe change up the tune just abit now and then throughout the track. raise the sound abit on the piano so its abit more dominating.

~X~

Step responds:

Wow, you're good at reviews :P.

Yeah I used to spend a lot of time in front of the piano thinking up melodies. Now I just go in front of a computerized piano roll and invent melodies which don't take as long, so I'm glad you like the melody.

Glad you like the piano, it's my favourite instrument xD.

These are all my MIDI songs, so to be honest I'm surprised you actually like them. If you want to hear what I can do now, you should check out 'Racing Through Eternity' if you like Trance, 'Land of Kings' if you like Classical and 'Cobra' if you like Classical Rock (well mostly orchestral instruments with powerful rock drums).

Thanks for reviewing!