XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[<EagleGuard> Project X]

I like the bells, decent track here

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty nice its been awhile since i heard stuff on here but have to say this was pretty good, especilly with the {BELLS} you should push the bells more, I love the way this tune starts off with the one rythem and pushes forward to seom differant feel but still keeping the same style so nice job there, some improvements could be presented like more power sounds with the other sounds you had in there but were a tad light, so thats another issue that could be worked on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Push the bells more they were really enique and thats what caught my attention, some more loder and quality sounds from any other instraments aswell, as stated as above.

EagleGuard responds:

Haha, thanks for digging up and reviewing this oldie! I didn't really know anything about mastering back then, so I just changed the volumes of each instrument a bit without actually equalizing every instrument as well.

Glad you liked it though, and I'll keep your advice in mind for future pieces =)

[Town Theme (EQ)]

Pretty good tune here

~~REVIEW~~
ok so its been awhile since i reviewed anything from you but must admit this was pretty good the sounds are very sharp and clear and its nice to hear something very soothing and pleasent if i say so myself, its not a wild tune but soothing and plays along very well to each note and so on, so in that aspect of things i really liked it, notbad at all, now for improving i think its perfect, maybe more build up around the middle but really not needed, anyways great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some mention of build up but again i think its just perfect as is.

Step responds:

Haha, I didn't even notice that you reviewed this! Sorry!

Anyhow I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm not very good at soothing songs but somehow you managed to find this soothing so I'm happy :3.

I tried to avoid doing too many buildups in this song simply because it was intended as a background track and if it has too many mood changes and buildups, it'll get in the way. Having reviewed so much Flash, I'm sure you understand what I mean.

Thanks for reviewing!

[I am the BEAT (instrumental)]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
Very good sounds here, it was abit hard to hear at first volume wise nothing major there, not even an issue, but regardless this was pretty decent, not sure if i heard your stuff before but if the rest is anything like this im highly pleased and enjoyed it, the vocal that i head was great and the backround sounds and even effects were great wouldnt mind if there was abit more of that, anyways great sounds here, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra backround effects, and sounds wouldnt hurt, and more of the vocals ofcorse.

Crueltool responds:

So great, but 7 from you?

[[--Oh Babe--]]

It was decent.

~~REVIEW~~
this was actually kinda cute, the voice in there works pretty good as a vocal, but seems like its too repettitive, maybe if there was some extra added vocals it would be more smoother along them lines, as for the rest of the tune it was pretty decent and fit well, only issue with this one really was the lack of more vocals, other then that this was pretty good stuff, so nice effort i did like what you presented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned there was some repettitive issues, and lack of more vocals.

DJM00se responds:

its a beat meant for rappers, what do you expect? jeez people on this site need to learn what hiphop is....

[J@K's Guitar Covers #4]

Very good sounds love it.

~~REVIEW~~
wow this was very impressive, and it does have a very strong feel of Jimi Hendrix Covers, gave me that impression right away, as soon as it started, and you can really hit those notes very well, now with some vocals it would have even been perfect, but regardless i thought you have a really nice piece here so awsome job there, maybe try and find someone who can put up the vocals, anyways great job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing really but some vocals would have gone perfect with this

gamejunkie responds:

Thanks for the review. Very much appreciated.

Cheers gamejunkie.

[Shadowgate Nightmare -Extended]

Nice tune here

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm now i like the softness of it but i do think you had too much of the soft sounding at the start, maybe give it a somewhat bigger build up and comming in faster, now you do present a dark touch here with this track wich is pretty impressive, so good job on the darkness of it all, but it needs a faster build up, but other then that it was pretty decent, maybe abit long but again its alright and i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
shorten it somewhat, and give it a faster build up at the starting.

Jonah-B responds:

Thanks!

[Game Over - Ben Oros]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
Nice build up on this one, and when i think its gonna get too much you just settle it there so awsome build up but i think that was the best part, you should probably add more to it after the build up go into this big climax and variaty of sounds and instraments, as its too dry and soft after the build up, just my opinion though, but anyways this is still good for what it is, so nice job on that end, untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use more sounds and instraments, after the build up.

DjOros responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated - and I will definitely look into fitting more into the drop. Glad you like the build up!

Thanks again!
~Ben Oros

[NGF11 - Riley]

Cute voice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty good you really do put your emotion into it, and its actually very good and reminds of of watching an anime cartoon so if that was the idea great job, could be somewhat longer maybe even changing up things like if your mad, silly and really happy even some sad moments but thats just me, but anyways great piece here i enjoyed it, it was a great test for people to see and use your voices, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some other moments you could put out there just an idea.

Hnilmik responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write up a review~

This entry was for a contest, with rules being to interpret and stay in character based on the images provided, so I'm actually glad that this made you think of an anime! Riley's character image featured an anime character and though I could've used a more obnoxiously anime voice, I chose to be more creative with my entry. Looks like it still got perceived as an anime either way though!

Trust me, I would've done WAAAYYY more, but entries had to be 45 seconds to 2 minutes, so this was all I could fit in within the time limit. Had to cut out a lot of extra gags and emotional shifts. Maybe an extended version someday~?