Nice tempo here
And once again I have come across a nice track here, cant say its perfect but it has some good points about that and for any bad points well all that can be fixed up and improved but as for this I like what you have started here. So keep at it, you got it down. This is a really nice tempo you have here it has a smooth feel that just flows along and keeps going like that till the end, nice work. And to close this out I must say you ahve a good tune here not the most perfectest one but it was still interesting, So with that keep making the awsome pieces. This had some good Rhythm to it and thats what I really liked about it, so nice work here.
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As for this tune, and stated above here is my imput, I think you have something positive here, if anything I might suggest some changes in tempo just a little here and there to mix it up a tad.
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