XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Taste of Things To Come]

Kinda differant

Hmm now this was notbad, its kind of differant and you do have a unique and odd sound here but then it also all falls into place with some good rythem and tune, and it has a dark yet soft touch about it aswell, so all is good, but other then that i thought it was alright, seems like it could have some deeper and even louder sounds thrown in there somehow though, anyways nice tune here, hope to hear more stuff from you sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i have suggested some deeper sounds and mixes for something added.

ZLEAP responds:

Agreed. I'm still working out kinks and perfecting my craft. All of my songs are done so on an extremely low budget. Bootleg production. But if I can churn these bad boys out with nothing, just imagine what I could do with something. The winds of change are a blowin'. -HG-

[=(SOTE)= (Arcane RMK)]

Nice start here

ok first off good work i like what you have here, its not too hard,and its not too soft either, you added just the right touches, and nice tone, in a way it was pretty pleasent so that was nice, And about "1:30" it starts to have a pick up or build up if you will, not alot but somewhat, maybe more harder build up with some mixture of differant sounds would be great, but other then that this was really good, keep up the decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i did suggest more "BUILD-UP" just a tad more for more of an effect ofthe soft tone going into more harder one.

ArcaneSoul responds:

Funny, people have said my buildups are usually amazing.

Ill keep that in mind :B

[Happy Holiday]

Nice sounds here

This starts off great and has a great pick-up, and just gets better with each second it plays out, it does have a good build up, and i also like the "VARIATY" you put in this one, all the sounds come together to really make for a decent tune, and i was impressed from the start so your effort does show, and it shows in the tune so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As it is now this doesnt need anything, but maybe some sort of echo effect might be nice.

ForeverBound responds:

okay good to hear ;)

[AB - Disturbance]

Decent

So here was something decent, i guess its been awhile since i heard some of your stuff, glad i got a chance to hear some, this was pretty neat as you add some "VARIATY" kinda reminds me of something with a transformers movie theme, you do have some dark sounds and synks in there, so that was a plus, it also possessed some good quality, As for improvment i dont know i kind of like this as is., anyways good piece here hope to hear more from you soon, untill then keep up the fantastic work on the audio tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned on this one, its apretty good piece, has a dark feel and jumps around, a good listen here, not anything to improve on as its pretty solid.

AsteroidBlues responds:

Thanks man ) I guess i`ll work on another track instead of improving this one, since it has nothing to improve :P

[F-777 - Not Afraid]

Enjoyed it

Here is a nice track to listen too, its a good tune and i have enjoyed it for what it is, now ofcourse there is always room for improvments but i will get to thatlater, but i do like the effort you have put into this so nice job there. This tune had a mix of differant stuff and moods and that was pretty nice i thought, The "PIANO" was very pleasent and made it more enjoyble so that was a nice touch i thought, This tune also had a sense of "INSPIRATION" to it and that made things much more enjoyble aswell, Then there wer the drums in wich also gave a nice feel along with the piano so nice touch there, So in the end this was a pretty good and solid tune, A nice tune here something i can listen to throughout the day or a stroll along the beach so nice tune i really liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this where do i start for ideas of improving With music its allways a hard choice, and most of the time its just something little and not really needed, but for the most of this it was pretty good. This was a pretty good solid tune so i thought there was no need for any real improvments as its pretty solid.

F-777 responds:

Thanks so much!! Crazy long review, you are awesome!

[Through Space And Time]

I thought it was cool

~~REVIEW~~
So this was pretty fast paced as it starts into it, i like some of the tempo changes, that was a nice beat, and when it gets really slow you really push it forward so nice job there on the tempo change, was a nice option, as for improving maybe more of that tempo chnge even a build up of some sort would help aswell, so you can try a few things to improve but overall its pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested some tempo changes, even some build up changes wouldnt hurt, give it a try and lets see what happens anyways good stuff here.

TheRealSam responds:

Well this song is damn old, I don't think I'll modify it as I don't have any of the original files left, and the only way to do that would be to record it again (and speaking frankly, it's not one of my favorite old songs :) ). But anyway, thanks a lot for your review! :)

[DeafMetalz-Metaljonus]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
OK so your first piece of 2012 cool, was wondering when you were gonna submit something new, and here we have, and thats some awsome guitar playing very solid playing and kicking, this was pretty good and could go very well with some vocals. so maybe thats something to throw in there at some point, for the mostpart of it, it was awsome glad i popped onto your profile randomly this morning, anyways keep up the awsome work, im hoping to hear more of your great guitar playing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest this is great as it is, it stands on its own just fine, onlything suggestion for any kind of improving might be, adding some vocals, even getting a female vocal on this would be pretty tight.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! It is my first post of 2012, I did'nt even realize that. Can't go wrong with some brutal shit to start off the year. I plan on doing vocals probably with my vocalist from my band just to do a test run with mixing vocals and other stuff. I'll post it when it is done. Thanks for the review mang!

-Jon

[Into The Darkness-Metaljo]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
ohmy this is a pleasent tune, now this was the type of style i was probably wanting to hear from you atleast once or twice, this is a more softer feel of your style and thats ok, i even like some of the backround effects and that was a nice touch making this abit more, then we go into some of the hard stuff, really neat stuff here on this piece, other then that it was alright, pretty good if you ask me, as for some improving, not so sure it was decent all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more focus on the softer touch here, the hard stuff is pretty good, but i did enjoy what you did with the softer touch, also thowing in more backround effects would be nice aswell.

Metaljonus responds:

thanks dude!

[ChaozFantasy-Metaljonus]

Very impressed with this one

~~REVIEW~~
Oh very nice with this one, now here you really push the build up, and the first few seconds of this track it has a unique sound, not sure what that was but would have been nice to have more focus on that aswell, but anyways the quality on this is top notch i can see and understand why this one got front paged so awsome job on that part of stuff, the sad part for me was that this was just a tad short, would have liked a longer version, cause you got some good quality playing with this one, love the guitar on this one, gonna add this one as a fave.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great quality here, great guitar great jamming music with this one, only issue i found lacking was that it was too short, if anything else i loved the build up and would even suggest doing something more with the opening sounds that were kind of unique.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! This is the actual of the length of the song I was paying tribute too I could have went off and made it my own but I wanted to stay true to all of the fanboys on this site so I did hehe. you rock!

[Nana's Song-Metaljonus]

Pretty decent once again

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool another cool track this almost sounds like some of the megaman ones you have, i must admitt though its nice to see your work front pages and congrats on that, and you should be proud of the score its pretty good for the track you released here, in myhonest oppinion this is not your best and you still won so thats one reason to be proud, so nice job there, i like this track but like the other one i reviewed its need some of that harder tunes you can bring in, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all congrats on the front page, well worth it with this piece, this was pretty smoothall the way through, onlything on this i thought could be somewhat better would possibly be to add some of the harder tones just a tad here and there, anyways nice job once again.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! but this track is for my grandma who passed away when I wrote it. you may not think its my best but I put alot of emotion into it and think it is pretty good. I will probably go back and remix it to make it sound fuller but I got to find the session first haha. Thanks for the review.