XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[--Oh Babe--]]

It was decent.

~~REVIEW~~
this was actually kinda cute, the voice in there works pretty good as a vocal, but seems like its too repettitive, maybe if there was some extra added vocals it would be more smoother along them lines, as for the rest of the tune it was pretty decent and fit well, only issue with this one really was the lack of more vocals, other then that this was pretty good stuff, so nice effort i did like what you presented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned there was some repettitive issues, and lack of more vocals.

DJM00se responds:

its a beat meant for rappers, what do you expect? jeez people on this site need to learn what hiphop is....

[J@K's Guitar Covers #4]

Very good sounds love it.

~~REVIEW~~
wow this was very impressive, and it does have a very strong feel of Jimi Hendrix Covers, gave me that impression right away, as soon as it started, and you can really hit those notes very well, now with some vocals it would have even been perfect, but regardless i thought you have a really nice piece here so awsome job there, maybe try and find someone who can put up the vocals, anyways great job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing really but some vocals would have gone perfect with this

gamejunkie responds:

Thanks for the review. Very much appreciated.

Cheers gamejunkie.

[Shadowgate Nightmare -Extended]

Nice tune here

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm now i like the softness of it but i do think you had too much of the soft sounding at the start, maybe give it a somewhat bigger build up and comming in faster, now you do present a dark touch here with this track wich is pretty impressive, so good job on the darkness of it all, but it needs a faster build up, but other then that it was pretty decent, maybe abit long but again its alright and i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
shorten it somewhat, and give it a faster build up at the starting.

Jonah-B responds:

Thanks!

[Game Over - Ben Oros]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
Nice build up on this one, and when i think its gonna get too much you just settle it there so awsome build up but i think that was the best part, you should probably add more to it after the build up go into this big climax and variaty of sounds and instraments, as its too dry and soft after the build up, just my opinion though, but anyways this is still good for what it is, so nice job on that end, untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could use more sounds and instraments, after the build up.

DjOros responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated - and I will definitely look into fitting more into the drop. Glad you like the build up!

Thanks again!
~Ben Oros

[NGF11 - Riley]

Cute voice

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty good you really do put your emotion into it, and its actually very good and reminds of of watching an anime cartoon so if that was the idea great job, could be somewhat longer maybe even changing up things like if your mad, silly and really happy even some sad moments but thats just me, but anyways great piece here i enjoyed it, it was a great test for people to see and use your voices, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some other moments you could put out there just an idea.

Hnilmik responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write up a review~

This entry was for a contest, with rules being to interpret and stay in character based on the images provided, so I'm actually glad that this made you think of an anime! Riley's character image featured an anime character and though I could've used a more obnoxiously anime voice, I chose to be more creative with my entry. Looks like it still got perceived as an anime either way though!

Trust me, I would've done WAAAYYY more, but entries had to be 45 seconds to 2 minutes, so this was all I could fit in within the time limit. Had to cut out a lot of extra gags and emotional shifts. Maybe an extended version someday~?

[RS- Forever]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
So notbad with this it starts off fast and keeps going with all the differant sounds and such, and has some nice differant sounds in there making for a good piece and the chimes i think they were chimes, were a great piece i loved it and made the track perfect so if i were to add or change anything on this its probably adding more chimes and making the tune longer in the end, so other then that, this was notbad at all and i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
change some of the more reppetitive points with some more chimes and mix it up abit.

KSBeats responds:

Ty very much, I will take this into account on future projects.

[Transformers - Rising Prime]

Fantastioc relation to movies

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was really brilliant, it has the whole feel of the movies and prime, it was abit on the soft side, i can understand it being soft at the start but you should have had a build-up alot sooner and come in abit harder and faster towards the end, it was good for the flowing quality of the music you are presenting, there was just no ump or edge that really grabbed me, but some more power sounds would do that, now i understand that might not be your path for this either way it was brilliant sounding.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fantastic piece and relates to the movies well but wouldnt mind abit more ump to this one. i suggested above.

Sheodon responds:

Hey,

Thank you for the review, it is really appreciated and useable. I will tell you first that I'm not satisfied with the song itself, I don't like it, I'd totally re-do it now if I had enough time for it. Maybe I'll re-do it, but I've been already working on 4 totally different projects at the same time.

Yeah, I understand what you mean. It's slow at the beginning and has its own atmosphere, but could be stronger in the end, with some drums and percussion to make the feel that the Prime risen to defeat the Decepticons.

[Lasting Hope]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow this is nice, you may just be my new fave audio artist, ill have to checkout the rest of your stuff, but i got that idea from just the first few seconds of this piece, very pleasent and soothing, so i cant wait for a full version, and if its like this it will be a fantastic piece so i will look forward to it and look for it, again this was pleasent and peacful, very welldone, anyways good luck on your next version.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything this could use is some nice vocals.

AshleyAlyse responds:

That is exactly what I would love in to have in this song, some amazing vocals. It's a little hard with the program I use since Reason doesn't have very good vocal refills. :( But I will try to finish this soon when I'm in the mood! Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it! :)