Whooa
This is kind of like a story its a long ten minute one too, the "VOICE" is good but you need to ad much more "EMOTION" and have some pauses here and there.
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More emotion, more passion and paus once in awhile.
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Whooa
This is kind of like a story its a long ten minute one too, the "VOICE" is good but you need to ad much more "EMOTION" and have some pauses here and there.
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More emotion, more passion and paus once in awhile.
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Dude I recorded this when I was 15 and had an awful microphone. I had a ton to improve on back then.
This was literally four years ago, and I hate this recording so much. One of the worst things I've ever recorded. I listen back on it and cringe. Worst recording I've ever done next to the old creepypasta readings I made before then. I've gotten so much better over the years, so no need to add a "things to improve on" section, lol.
I was awful back then. A whole lot worse than I am now.
Another good one
You have a good voice here and you use it very well, nice style good quality, keep up the fantastic style and work, I like what you have done here.
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Awsome stuff here.
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Thanks dude
Good stuff
I really like the "QUALITY" you have here the sound was great the voices were decent and it all seems to come around very well, so I say ad more and keep up the good work.
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Add more choices.
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Thanks bro
Ha
Well this here was a good "LAUGH" and really brings out a "SCARY" feel to it all and such kinda short but still a good use for a laugh.
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Scary laugh could use more scary ones for added quality.
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Haha that old thing. Thanks. Im in a mic transition right now. A lot of my stuff will start to sound a bit more pro.
Notbad
Well this one was a bit different I like all the "SOUND/FX" but overall the "VOICES" are pretty good and welldone, so nice work, and I like how you have added a story here with this one, so nice job.
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Good stuff no changes needed.
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Thanks, this was improvised, the story just came in naturally.
I like this
Wow you really have some good voices here and you really give it that "DARK" feel and scary touch just like "VINCENT PRICE" once did. anyways nice work here.
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To be honest I thought this was pretty perfect right on key.
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Thank you for the review my friend! That's quite a compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed :D Hopefully I can do a lot more of these short poem/readings in the future!
Notbad
Well must say this was notbad, you have some interesting sounds with this one and it also has a a good vibe really cool sounds though and you have lots of different sounds in there and it all makes for a good track so nice work here.
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I thik its perfect as is to be honest.
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Wow, thank you man!
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