XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ELECTROFUNK]

Nice beat

So this was a plus because it was not exactly mainstream but has its own unique style and thats always a great find in the portal, so nice start up here. Well here wasa nice beat and it has a good tempo throughout but I think you need to make this longer with some slow down points and then again with some build ups, but making it much longer and stretched out would be a huge plus. I like the results of this track But I will cut this review short now but on that note you have some good talents here so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
longer tune, more stretched out and more build up.

~X~

Zazzy responds:

So let me recap on your review:

It needs to be longer.

This is a demo. It's not long. That's the point.

[Rebel]

Really nice

This one has some good attention because they are interesting and unique in there own way and style, so props to you for this one. You have a nice beat here starts off slow but that was part of the build up and that worked the whole piece could be longer as this one was a tad short but still pretty entertaining and a good tune if you ask me. You have a good vibe and style here and I will check out more of what you offer, It was different but thats what I enjoyed about it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer. it was sort of on the short side.

~X~

TheDoubleOne responds:

Thanks for the kind words and the criticism.

[a drive down a country road]

Nice

I like what you came up with here, Its nice to find stuff like this and glad you created something like this type of tune for us all. some nice soft feel here and yes it does feel like you are driving down an old country road the ending excess of the song where it goes very soft I thaught you could do without but you could stretch the rest out to be longer. So before I go I will say it was nice checking out your work and hope to checkout even more stuff that you may dawn for us here in the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the ending excess of the song where it goes very soft I thaught you could do without but you could stretch the rest out to be longer.

~X~

lofiskyline15 responds:

thanks for the kind words!

this one was definitely an experiment on kind of song dynamics, where it goes from mid-range to pretty dang quiet haha :3 but I'll definitely keep that in mind for the future!

[Into The Void]

Nice tune

So theres a lot of mishaps in the portal and Im glad this is not one of them, Im also glad I found this fine piece of yours here today. Nice tune like this almost sounds like the starting to a scary movie, but have to say you did do pretty well and made a decent piece here I could see you adding more to this with a few additions maybe some backround sounds and even some build up on this would be a huge plus. Ok so you have something good here nothing that upgrades wouldnt hurt to have and make better but you still bring a nice tune here and glad I found this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround sounds and build up are great suggestion for pushing it just a tad.

~X~

DarkGod666 responds:

Hey, thanks for the review! I appreciate the criticism, and honesty.

[Desperate Times]

Really nice stuff

Kinda simular but not as much and dang sounds a lot like eminem but still with your own style its unique and the lyrics are really solid here and top notch stuff here, I was really impressed with the sharpness and quality you bring to the table, very well done piece indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more backround ambient sounds or even some street sound/fx.

~X~

ELEVENT responds:

appreciate it! this is really old some of the newer stuff is at ilovetowritemusic.com

[326E]

Very nice

So this sounds very good like the lyrics too kinda sounds familuar to emminem but still could use some work, but you seem to have some skills would love to see you move forward with this piece, great track here great words and awsome backround music aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be very honest I couldnt find anything that really needs some upgrades, changes improving, you have a good quality piece here and I honestly like how this is by its own.

~X~

ELEVENT responds:

Thanks! Please visit ilovetowritemusic.com for more of my original music.

[The Lonely Road]

Wow beautifull

You really put the efforts in this one just the way that piano starts off and really comes in deep and sharp with some quality and style of things, This one actually sounds like a scary theme or a marching soldier, seems like it should have went longer cause at the end there it just stopped like it needed one more bit or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seemed like it ended short and was missing something there at the end.

~X~

ConsciousAutomation responds:

This was one of my older theory pieces. Eventually, when I come back to producing, I hope to return to this type of track with the added benefit of better production.

Thanks for the review.

[Mercury]

Lovely piece

Now here was a lovely piece and it starts off great just some nice clean and high quality stuff that really came together as a whole, I am un-familuar with your work but if the rest is like this you have an instant fan, Now not sure what we can improve from here as this is a pretty solid piece, and honestly I think you have it down perfectly, so no changes needed. anyways great stuff. so all things come to an end so does this review, but not before I have to say that it was a pleasure, to hear your sound workon this one, so notbad with this one. This was actually one of the Finest tracks I have seen in a good week atleast, so nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now not sure what we can improve from here as this is a pretty solid piece, and honestly I think you have it down perfectly, so no changes needed.

~X~

Wamborghini responds:

Thanks for the review :)