Very nice ideed
wow that "PIANO" is really intense and deep more focus of that would be really cool, love the intense of how well this builds up very nice, And to end this off, it was a pleasure listening this it was differant yet still pretty good, not what I would normally listen too but still something decent here. so keep up what you are doing, because you have something great going, and would love to hear more, Alright so I wont drag this on but you have a wonderfull production of a tune here I can see some small upgrades but in all honesty you have something good.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on some deeper piano like you did with the start would be my tip of the day.
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