I like it
instrumental version you say well I really like this version here its really different and "UNIQUE" you have a unique style here with the music and I like the "VOCALS" makes it all fit well together so props to you on this piece, Onlything I would ad on this might be have the vocals go into some deep moments but anyways nice work.
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Onlything I would ad on this might be have the vocals go into some deep moments
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