Really nice work.
You have a good track here it was interesting, and sometimes it felt differant, Im not good on judging audio stuff, but I must say that this was still alright now that doesnt say that it cant be improved, but thats more for later. so for now you do have something decent, just go with it. This tune was really soothing and just speaks to you, the pleasent sounds jump out in its soft mannor. So that was a decent tune you had in here, Some things could be better I thought but overall I found it to be an interesting tune, and would love to hear more stuff of yours in the near future, but anyways I had a good time with this one, it was a nifty track here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Decent submission here I was really taken back by all the differant sounds and how you made it all come together, I dont think any changes and fixes should be done at this time.
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