XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[40 seconds of romance]

Nice beat here

Well this one was very short so right there alone I can see you improving on making it longer and stretching this out, more like a song with some more mixes of variaty of sounds, but I eill say that it was a pleasent piece and it would be great as a longer version, of what you do have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a tad bit longer with more content.

~X~

[Ambience- Halcyon]

Notbad

Well this one here was a bit on the slow side of things but I did like the slowness of it there are some things you could do to speed some parts but that might not be your intent, I do like the style here but maybe some small build up here or there just a few points that would take it away from the mainstream flow.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a nice mainstream flow here and while thats notbad, you could ad some Build-up points here or there or even just one or two for something different.

~X~

[[Free Sample] String Gardens]

Very nice

From start to finish this was notbad at all I could go over a few things and I will in time but this was still a nice track, so props to you on this one. This one kind of reminds of of a pirate theme like on a ship at sea or something and I can see it being used for something like that, so in that sense you could ad some build up like theres wild waters or something but its an idea that could work with a ship scene. Alright so I could see this being used in a number of movies and games, and you have a nice little track here with some great promise.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a little longer with some more build up about it.

~X~

[Deeper than Deep]

Very aspiring piece

Seems like you poured your heart and soul into this one and the sounds really come alive and have this great quality to them you didnt just ad all sorts of sounds but you actually made something unique and different. so nice efforts here it was a beautiful piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be slightly longer.

~X~

[Fo cereal?!?]

Different

Well this was different and a little bit strange but seems like you have some drums that you could re work on as they are too fast so my advice is slow down the drums a bit, There was some nice "WHISTLE" sounds in this aswell came out well, so anyways props to you here on a wonderfull piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of the voices stuff and whistle stuff it creates a more unique style.

~X~

[BMus & ALESDA! - Overcloud]

Very nice

So this one has been a pleasure to review because you just dont hear much stuff like this these days and its been nice to find it. Right from the start this one kicked well for me, you know what you are doing here and you bring it fourth in a high volume of quality, there was even some nice build ups here and there and it made for a very nice up beat and great flow of tempo. so very nice work here. So now and then its nice to find stuff like this and get that vibe that you pulled off here a great find if you ask me, very nice indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Stretch it out longer with more of those build ups I mentioned.

~X~

[++< Far Away >++]

Pretty deep

And here was something pretty deep sounding and looks like you really put some time and effort into this one, the sound really comes out well, its nothing crazy but you bring it with all these deep sounds and really create a world there and for that you have done what others have not, so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of that lightning or thunder would really do this more justice.

~X~

[If Nothing Mattered]

Very pleasent

And here was a very pleasent sound you are really good with the piano mix and made some very sharp and crisp sounds and I was really delighted to hear this one, aswell as review this, you have some great skills and hope you continue to always move forward with this type.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now while this is a soft and pleasent piece I could see you having more build up in it.

~X~

[Schematist - Fragments]

Beautifull sound

So there was some hidden sounds and with all the hard work and great skills you bring to the table you have braught those sounds alive. I like this and you have really put some nice sounds in this making it very enjoyble with all the soft sounds and adding a few extras here and there, it "FLOWED" well from start to finish and was not too long nor was it too short but just right in my book. So nice effort here today and not really sure what else to say because you have done it all here today bringing some good quality alive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so today what I see and hear ofcourse is that this particular piece does not need any changes as it has a drive of its own on its own style.

~X~

Schematist responds:

Thank you so much for listening and taking the time to share your analysis with me! There is more on the way! Cheers!

[Reawen - S.T.Y.L.E]

um ok

Well I must say while there are some stuff in here you can work with alot of this was scratchy and hard to enjoy but I think if you worked on it a little bit more put some quality and just mainstreamed it it would be a lot better then it is, but its a start atleast.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more quality and make it much longer with more mix and variaty.

~X~