Notbad
Well this was notbad, I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. theres a number of things you could do, but adding much more variaty is needed and really changing up some of the sounds would just be a plus on your end.
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I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. and more variaty of the different sounds and this was a tad short.
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