Short but sweet
Wow this one is really short but has such a kick to it. You make it come alive in all it's glory even as short as it is but you could really make this into a song just needs to be longer but you do have a nice beat here with a bit of techno style and that's all on the plus side of things so nice job here I like it
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer like into a song version
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