I like it
So with all the tests you have done I think it came out very well and I like the style here and if it's missing anything at all it may be as you mentioned some build up maybe some fade out beforehand but besides that this was a brilliant audio and glad you suggested this to the audio portal and once again this was fantastic at best so keep up the great work and I look forward to even more
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some build up and fade outs
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