Nice work
So this here was some nice work, now my tip here would be to give it more domminant sound at the start then build it up even more, but anyways this was a nice piece here and I for one look forward to even more from you in the near future, but anyways keep up the fantastic work.
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now my tip here would be to give it more domminant sound at the start then build it up even more
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