XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wrench Ninja - Street Beat]

Kinda short

Well this was on the short side of things but I like the vibe this gives off has this whole native style feel about it almost like some sort of rain dance or something, but it was just too short so if you can stretch this out just a tad it will be one fantastic piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Stretch it out to be longer.

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[Wrench Ninja - Get Outta Here]

Notbad

So this is cool I like the variaty you do bring into this, and the drums are cool but they sound very rough maybe you want to tone down the drums just a tad so its not so rough, but its an interesting piece you may want to make this longer too, anyways just some input.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Drums could be tones down and this could be a longer tune.

~X~

[Wrench Ninja - Haunted Place]

Different

Well this was different but was kind of more of a sound f/x you could turn this into a song of sorts but needs more content and some variaty but this one was more like a sound clip and in that case can be used in stuff still but does need more to it, other then what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could turn this into a song of sorts but needs more content and some variaty

~X~

[Bells (WIP)]

Very nice

So this one does have some good quality about it and you should really think about making it into that song you talk about it has that "IT" factor as some say my only issue here is that its way too short and needs to be made into a full fledged song. Finest detail I have heard in a long time, So I am looking forward to see what else you can come out with, as this was one of those pieces that sticks out at you so nice efforts here. you gave this some nice Rhythm and have composed a nice piece here. Keep up this type of quality.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my only issue here is that its way too short and needs to be made into a full fledged song.

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[Wrench Ninja - Day in the Park]

Cool track

This almost sounds a bit techno and such, but you marked it as something else it does have a cool vibe something like at a dance club but on a lighter note, this was just way too "SHORT" for sure make it longer ad some more notes some more sounds etc. But a good track regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for sure make it longer ad some more notes some more sounds etc.

~X~

[WrenchNinja-Hardcore Reggeaton]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. theres a number of things you could do, but adding much more variaty is needed and really changing up some of the sounds would just be a plus on your end.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. and more variaty of the different sounds and this was a tad short.

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[tetreese]

Very cool

wow this was very cool what you have here this will go as one of my faves its just that good you should really make this longer though and have more build up aswell. but besides that it couldnt be more perfect with a nice style you have here very welldone infact.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should really make this longer though and have more build up aswell.

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[Lousy Piano Improvisation 1 (2018)]

Beautiful

wow this was really beautifull you put together some nice piano mixes here with a nice style and the piano is beautifull a very welldone piece you have here if you ask me I enjoy it very much you should really make more pieces like this one maybe just not so long this one seemed really long. And to end things off here, again a decent tune with some little work needed as you have pushed some good effort though and such, I was pretty impressed. So on an ending note keep making some fantastic stuff not just for people around you but mostly because it gives you joy. so anyways im done here but keep making stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this one maybe just not so long this one seemed really long.

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Bertn1991 responds:

Aww, thank you so much.

I appreciate the kind words. I'm glad you found my playing beautiful. I made up the song on the spot, just playing whatever came to mind. It is pretty long, you're right. Next time I do an improvisation, I should try to make it shorter.

Thanks you for the constructive criticism and good advice :-)

[Recharged-Chocolate]

Very nice

This was very nice and the vocals are pretty good too actually the vocals are very welldone and made very well for the backround music it all seemed to come together, this track could be longer though seemed short but besides all that it was a great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it a bit longer if you can.

~X~

[Mario goes Pop]

Very nice indeed.

Wow I have to say this is really nice you really bring some nice talent here with these mario themed ideas and tunes, you really make it your own and twist the originals around to be your own so props to you for an artistic style and making something positive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its a mix all on its own.

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