Pleasent
Alright you have showcased some nice talent the ambient is soft but builds up My thing is I think it need more intense build up and more mix of different sounds added, A pleasent piece if I ever heard one myself, and you put in the time and effort to really bring out the best in the hidden sounds, Alright so nice track almost feels like its missing something but cant pin point it, But on a positive, I like the vibe here and theres a lot of variation in this. It progresses nicely and gets better as it goes along, so nice work here and some nice sound.
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My thing is I think it need more intense build up and more mix of different sounds added
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