Wow nice
Wow this was nice I love the build ups in this but seems like you could have even more build up. You have a nice style and there is some good melody feel to this even you have an amazing piece of work here and really just a beautiful sound so the onlything I would really ad would be more intense build up but anyways that's just one idea what you have is pretty good stuff
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More intense build up
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