Jazz it up
Jazz it up is what I say and that's what you did here you really gave it that jazz feel and it progressively builds onto that I do think this was kind of a short piece but again I still enjoyed this for what it is and what it is is an amazing piece with some build up so my suggestion is to make this longer it's solid work maybe even adding more and other instraments to ad to the whole jazz feel would be a plus anyways nice vibe
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added instraments for more of a jazz vibe
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