Very unique
Wow you have something really "UNIQUE" I like this "INDIE" style and I have gone ahead and added this as one of my faves, seems like you could have added some more build up and even some fade outs in the middle, So some things stood out for me on this one, It just jumps out at you alive, you have everything here in this one sharp, clear and good quality, Now to end this, you have a decent piece there is some open discussion for some improvment just a tad here or there, but other then that this was actually notbad at all, it was interesting in a few ways as i have mentioned, but anyways hope to see more stuff like this from you.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could have added some more build up and even some fade outs in the middle
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