Wow nice
This is really "NICE" I really love the "LYRICS" on this one, you have a good "VOICE" and it all works with rythem from start to finish and you push the limits on this one, you have some real "TALENT" for this kind of stuff, my suggestion for this is just make more great stuff, anyways nice work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my suggestion for this is just make more great stuff
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