Nice
So this was pretty good I really like what you have prepared here it has some solid sound and it builds apon eachother making a better outcome at the end result so really nice job on this piece onlything I could change up on this might be to make it longer but overall this was a solid entry and hope you keep making fantastic pieces like this as it was a very unique piece
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Maybe just make this longer
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