Nice
So this one was nice you have a good melody here and it really shows well the sound within that melody plays out well too I heard some drums in there I think you should push some drums more and more domminant drums too it would really be a cool idea too I like the idea of pushing the drums harder seems like you have some good potential on pushing more drums but that's my take on things
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Push the drums more
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