Very sharp
So this was some "SHARP" sound and some really good quality about it, I do think you could ad some back end sound f/x but thats just a minor thing you have some good depth here, A cool track you have here it runs pretty well and has some nice mixture of sounds that you have put together here you bring together something different and unique And I will say this was a Compelling piece with a subliminal msg I love, the progression it flows so well, Its stuff like this that really keep me interested in the portal, and this was a great track it really just jimps out at you. so nice start here, you have some great ideas on this one.
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I do think you could ad some back end sound f/x but thats just a minor thing you have some good depth here
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