Very good
So this was a really nice flow of sound here you have a nice track even though it was a tad short I still think you gave it some nice rythem and really kept it progressively going with some excitement and I was not bored at all so very nice work now I would suggest one thing and that would be to make this longer but that's my. Take on things with this fine tune of yours some e really nice sound here
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make this longer a few bars longer
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