XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dagon 3]

Wow nice

So nice work here I love that shine you have put on here on the tenticles really nice design here on this one you have some really nice work on this one that shine is amazing though so no major changes needed on this one, so keep up the good work as always

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes you do some beautiful wok so keep it up.

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Ruedefaux responds:

thank you :D

[Levitating islands]

Beautiful

Now this was a beautiful design and beautiful tree here you have some really nice linework with the tree very fine detail and the small added color in there is pretty nice too overall this was a beautiful view and a beautiful design you have here so really nice work here on this my advice would be to ad even more color to this give it a nice vibrant look about it

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More added color like on the tree maybe even the background

~X~

Doomroar responds:

Thanks, i see what you are saying, well this drawing is actually just the base sketch for an oil painting that i never got to finish: https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/5c81f779291b267aec22f3b5addec371


So i do agree, more color would make it look better.

[Sky Duels: Arc Paladin]

Great work

Wow you amaze me with each new piece you post this was an interesting character love the cartoony style here great detail and nice character here cant wait for more of what you post and no changes needed here this was pretty awsome work here so nice job once again.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes needed

~X~

jouste responds:

Hey thanks a lot!

i think i really found the voice of the chicken knights with this piece. I really hope that I can keep it up with all the other ones!

*highfives

[Bulma's Booty]

Love the design on this character

You did a nice job here especially on her back side and clothed was good too some added detail in the backround would be a nice touch, I enjoy the detail that people push forward on this one, "THIS-PARTICULAR-PIECE" was pretty nifty, some very nice sharp details its those fine details that really come out well and "SHINE-WITH-A-SPARKLE", so nice work on a great character design here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added detail in the backround would be a nice touch

~X~

LettuceHeadz responds:

Thank you, I very much appreciate your feedback and will be taking it on! I'm glad you liked the pic and hopefully I can get more out soon.

[The Cacti Boys]

Nice

So these characters are pretty nice I like the detail within each character it was the backround that seemed kind of bland maybe some props or a backdrop scene, even some cactus would be fitting in a way lol, anyways great artwork here and some amazing detail you have pushed here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
it was the backround that seemed kind of bland maybe some props or a backdrop scene, even some cactus would be fitting in a way lol

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BoyPorcelain responds:

thats very fair, backgrounds are my weakest point which is why i rarely do em, i am looking to change that this year however! Thanks :)

[Stargazing]

Great view

So this was such a great view shot here on this one, the color all seems to come in together, seems like there should be some item of focus of what they are staring at, but besides that you have done some amazing work here, anyways nice job indeed make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like there should be some item of focus of what they are staring at

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Kidgalactus responds:

Yeah, the idea was that they are just staring of into the distance. Kind of a quiet moment.

Thanks so much for the feedback!

[Siak Pin-up]

I love this piece

So as soon as I saw this I wan an instant fan because you bring some very nice quality to the art portal with this unique design here very interesting piece of art, I do think some added glows and sparkles on the backround specks would be a nice touch up on this particular piece, but it was a great piece all the way around.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do think some added glows and sparkles on the backround specks would be a nice touch up on this particular piece

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SiakStuff responds:

Thank you. I have a constant fear that adding too much to a background will overpower the character, but I agree that adding a bit of something to the cubes would have helped it more. I'll be sure to give future scenes more attention in terms of balancing.

[Submit!]

Amazing

So this one was pretty amazing work, that backround is nice, the character itself is even more amazing and you really made some awsome detail like all the armour and detail even the sword was very sharp looking but I would d some shiny points like sparkles and shine on the armour and sword element.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Added shine and sparkle on the gold and metal points like armour and sword.

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HandKannon responds:

Thanks, I appreciate the critique too. You're right I could have pushed this a bit further but after awhile you kinda get burned out and rush some things. But i'm working on figuring out a way to work faster so I don't get burned out at the end. Thanks for visiting.

[Metal Gear Girls #4: TX-55 and D]

Nice

Very nice detail on these girls here I do like what you did with the backround too very nice detail my take on this might be just adding some added shine and sparkle on the head pieces, but with all that said this was a nice art piece and great character detail here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
my take on this might be just adding some added shine and sparkle on the head pieces

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DashXero responds:

Thanks for the feedback! If I do more of these, I'll keep that in mind.

[mindchamber's red baron!]

Such beautiful work of art

This was such a work of art here love the color and love the design here the red baron is always a great topic and idea and this was absolutly beautiful no changes needed on this piece as this was a great art piece, so keep making beautiful art I love your style.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes needed on this piece as this was a great art piece

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jouste responds:

hey thanks!
this was a great throwback commission. I had a great time touching on this classic character. thanks so much for getting me to check it out again!

*highfives