XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Squirrely Boots in Soviet Garb]

A cute piece here

the character is simple but there is some nice stuff here, So I was pretty pleased with this you have outdone yourself, on this and this one has all the great elements in the right places, you do good work. maybe adding a Twist here and there would give it a more unique feel and look, but might be nice with some extra changes.

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Honestly no changes are needed I found it to be just right as is.

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Bertn1991 responds:

I very much appreciate it, sir. Good to hear from you again. I'm glad you enjoyed this commie squirrel. Thanks again.

Have a lovely day :)

[Clever lady]

Nice

This was another great charchter from you you have all the portions right the shadows even look good and I have to say this was just a nice design overall now the background was not bad but I could see you adding more of a scene or something like that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail

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jthiagosena94 responds:

Thanks for your comment!

[Autumn]

Amazing

Wow I have to say that this is some amazing work at big lighting effect can go a long ways I do think you could have some of that lighting reflect off the eyes more would be a cool opinion that may improve on this piece but with that said this was a beautiful drawing painting

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More lighting off the eyes

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StevenX7 responds:

Even though this is an older piece, I greatly appreciate your critique and will take it into consideration on future ones, thank you ^^

[Manny vs. Mayweather]

Very nice work

So this was cool and makes sense about that fight the graphics as smooth as ever and you pushed some nice ideas the shinyness shines through and I like that you put out real events into Sprite and even pixel work anyways nice work indeed keep it up

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No changes here it's just right and is in no need for any changes

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

I'm concern that the body proportion can be a little odd. I dunno if I will make a remake for this pic in the future.

[Alorian Guard on the Rack]

Very nice

So this was cool I really like this the animation was really cool and the color was amazing the animation was pretty smooth the expression on her face was perfect so as for any improvements I think you have done well and this doesn't warrant any changes

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As mentioned above no changes needed

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PaddleTone responds:

Thanks, dude. Sorry for the late reply, but it means alot to me!

[Senya Contest: Senya's Fun Ride]

Haha nice

So this was kind of adorable and cute I love the bright and vibrant color use here the animation makes this such a better piece and the drawings are just fabulously done well so anyways nice work here very good style and submitted artwork here until the next time keep making great stuff

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I didn't find anything really to need any changes here

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PaddleTone responds:

Appreciated! The colors were definitely one of my favorite parts of this piece!

[Senya Spankmation]

Very nice

This was a good one and glad I saw the color one finally love the shine you added I think adding some sparkles on top of that shine would be cool anyways nice job on the color version no changes other then some added sparkle would be cool anyways nice work

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Some added sparkle

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PaddleTone responds:

Heh, yeah. Hindsight's 20-20, but I can see where I should've added some extra detail now.

[Quoi De Neuf, Paris?]

A beautiful sight

And here was a beautiful sight you have presented I think adding some birds and other props like that would be cool maybe even more dominant clouds or something but other then that this was a really cool piece you have here and hope you make more like it

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Ad some props like birds and butterfly elements

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PaddleTone responds:

I'll admit I might have been a little too subtle with the colors. Adding birds definitely could've added a little pop to this one.

[Follow the Leader: Assentlov (GIF)]

Beautiful

So this was another great piece of art the character is well done and the animation notbad everything seems to flow along I think as an extra added detail the jewelry like on her nips could have a shine or sparkle comming off of them besides that this was awesome stuff

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Some jewelry sparkles

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PaddleTone responds:

Hmm, some jewelry sparkles... I would need to think about how it would work with just grey scale, but that could be interesting and worth exploring.

[BlackJack Pin Up: Elsa]

Awesome

So this was an awesome piece the backside pose was just cool and the color of clothing was perfect I think more lighting effect from the moonlight should have more of a dominant effect but overall this was a cool piece here you have a unique art style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting from the moonlight

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PaddleTone responds:

Thanks for the compliments. I could definitely see a greater contrast between the light source and the background improving the whole piece.