XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Fantastic Dream]

A comic with passion

oh this one was a long one very nice indeed, anyways I have no changes or suggestions as this was pretty solid as is, Its always nice to see these web-comics but with this particular one you bring some nice passion to the front lines of this comic and its some nice scenes some entertaining action here too you really know how to make some nice comic work and you have done just that.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no changes or suggestions as this was pretty solid as is

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[Secret Society]

A wonderful web-comic idea on this one

You make some of the most interesting characters in your comics onlything I might suggest would be making the comic strip longer, I have to say this was some nice idea behind it all you have some really nice work here you have some great visuals, A wonderful web-comic idea on this one, and you really make the whole comic come alive with all its elements some really nice visuals too so really great efforts here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I might suggest would be making the comic strip longer

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[Jasper in lingerie]

Nice sexy character

A nice close up here would have loved more dominant skintone element but this was still nice, intense visuals showing off some very aluring parts Nice sexy pose here and some really nice visuals that come into place, Nice sexy character you have here and I absolutly love the details here with some very aluring elements that really make this a sexy character.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would have loved more dominant skintone element but this was still nice

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[The Worst Criminal]

This comic idea is cool

I love how you make the comics simple yet detailed and makes it really jump out at you, make these longer sometime, I like this particular one it brings on some nice detail and lots of flavour, and its that flavor and vibe that keep me interested for the long haul so this is something I would love to see you continue with much more entries regardless I found this comic entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make these longer sometime

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[Show-off]

Gotta love some comics

The stories in these comics really come alive and love what you do with color, would be nice if you made longer ones, Well gotta love some comic and you have presented a really nice come base here you bring something unique and different to the table with this particular comic and make it jump alive with very nice detail nice effects and really cool story base ideas.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would be nice if you made longer ones

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[Code Names]

Nifty Web Comic

You seem to really enjoy these comics they are pretty nice no changes are needed here, I love the direction of this particular one and has some really good visuals so nice comic you have dawned on us, This is the comic I can see myself really getting deep into so I do hope to find more of your comic and art styles in the near future, for now this was a good entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
they are pretty nice no changes are needed here

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[Pro-Crastinator]

Nifty Comic

Another fun comic I do wish these were a tad longer they are nice though, These comics are always nice but you ad some nice depth to the action and story, and its that story that you have on here that jumps out at you, so you have a pretty nice web-comic here and I look forward to even more of this fine web-comic on this one, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish these were a tad longer they are nice though

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[Succoth Benoth]

Amazing

Wow now this is some amazing work you have here, the amount of detail is just un real somany great detailed items and characters just very awsome indeed one of my faves here on this site, I think some sort of fancy border would be very nice here, This was an Engaging piece And glad I had the chance to review this. And Finally A refreshing piece that shows the style and talent, meaning you outdid yourself here with a brillint piece of art

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think some sort of fancy border would be very nice here

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[CLIMAX Bros]

Very cool

So this was nice I like the color use here maybe there faces could have more of a glow on them or something, You have shown lots of talent here and shown us the effort and detail that can be done in pieces like this, you bring an interesting style to the table.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe there faces could have more of a glow on them or something

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[Gluttony]

Very nice

So this was nice and I will say its kind of unique too homer and mickey anyways great design here I do wish you had a bit more in the backround, nice work indeed with this piece you have here. so nice work done here adding more to it would be great but as it is now its pretty good and honestly its very smooth looking

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do wish you had a bit more in the backround

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