XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Origin Of Dave's Undies]

A fun mix of comic here

The origin of his underwhear lol this was for sure a funny one and once again no changes are needed, so this was A fun mix of comic here, you have some nice detail here and the outcome of this one was pretty nifty, these comic entries get better with each new one and I found this to be a delight, so really nice work here on this submission and I hope to see more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
once again no changes are needed

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[Trading Cards]

This comic series is pure awsome

I love this particular one because the color is really vibrant and a great little story here, no changes are really needed here, some really good details and effects but most of all you bring on some great comic frames with a twist of adventure This comic series is pure awsome A fine comic series here, some great frames of adventures and great characters aswell, always feeding off of eachother really makes this combo work well.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes are really needed here

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[Kiss Creature]

Very nice

The backround could have more details and maybe even adding a frame or border would accent this piece even better, these styles of black and white are notbad and they present a classic form of beauty but anyways you have a nice sketch or black and white design here, and its always nice to see something as nice as this design and drawing come alive in just black and white.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
backround could have more details and maybe even adding a frame or border would accent this piece even better

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[skeleton worm monster!!!]

Very detailed

So this was very detailed the shading alone was intense, I do wish there was more detail in the backround though, You have made some amazing things here very beautiful black and white drawing and or sketch here so nice work indeed, And just goes to show that sometimes we dont need color because black and white can show just as much detail as yours has here, so props to you on a fine piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish there was more detail in the backround

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[Toph Heavy - Champion's Belt]

An aluring character design

Very nice black and white here maybe adding some color would really improve on this piece, some nice character work you have designed and a good sexy theme here really beautiful, you are very talented especially when it comes to a sexy character like this very nice line work and made it visually look smooth so nice job here I look forward to more sexy characters.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe adding some color would really improve on this piece

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[Lazy Jinx]

Such beauty in this sexy character

I love the drawing itself but the backround could use some more detail and element about it, a nice and aluring element with some vivid visuals of a beautiful design of the character so really nice job here great detail nice character Such beauty in this sexy character you really have a nice form here of the character so really nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I love the drawing itself but the backround could use some more detail and element about it

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[A Fantastic Dream]

A comic with passion

oh this one was a long one very nice indeed, anyways I have no changes or suggestions as this was pretty solid as is, Its always nice to see these web-comics but with this particular one you bring some nice passion to the front lines of this comic and its some nice scenes some entertaining action here too you really know how to make some nice comic work and you have done just that.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no changes or suggestions as this was pretty solid as is

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[Secret Society]

A wonderful web-comic idea on this one

You make some of the most interesting characters in your comics onlything I might suggest would be making the comic strip longer, I have to say this was some nice idea behind it all you have some really nice work here you have some great visuals, A wonderful web-comic idea on this one, and you really make the whole comic come alive with all its elements some really nice visuals too so really great efforts here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I might suggest would be making the comic strip longer

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[Jasper in lingerie]

Nice sexy character

A nice close up here would have loved more dominant skintone element but this was still nice, intense visuals showing off some very aluring parts Nice sexy pose here and some really nice visuals that come into place, Nice sexy character you have here and I absolutly love the details here with some very aluring elements that really make this a sexy character.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would have loved more dominant skintone element but this was still nice

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[The Worst Criminal]

This comic idea is cool

I love how you make the comics simple yet detailed and makes it really jump out at you, make these longer sometime, I like this particular one it brings on some nice detail and lots of flavour, and its that flavor and vibe that keep me interested for the long haul so this is something I would love to see you continue with much more entries regardless I found this comic entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make these longer sometime

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