XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Truth Or Dare Pt.3]

A fun adventure

Well this one was interesting I do have to say I love the small detailed of effects and such like the fire or flames etc makes it so much better, So here we are with another great adventure with such great humor I love how far you have taken this comic series from the very start to what it is now and it keeps going strong so props to you this particular entry was really funny and full of some adventure.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
make more soon

~X~

[Shagrath]

Very nice

So here was a very nice piece almost feel like you could slap some borders on this one, anyways great stuff, love your style here of black and white design and drawing, And glad you have not added much color yet but when you do it will be pretty amazing stuff, the style here and design of the black and white is pretty good though and cant wait for some color one day.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
almost feel like you could slap some borders on this one, anyways great stuff

~X~

fadedshadow responds:

yeah a border probably would create a nice effect. also dunno if you'd be interest but there's a version where i just did the line-art and it was a pretty good minimalist piece imo.

[Spartans]

Nice work here

Very nice work on this one and no major changes needed Nice work, its a black and white style drawing here I do think you could ad more to it but what you do have is pretty brilliant, and I like that its not colored or has very little colored but adding some wouldnt hurt either, but anyways nice drawing here. keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no major changes needed

~X~

[The Origin Of Dave's Undies]

A fun mix of comic here

The origin of his underwhear lol this was for sure a funny one and once again no changes are needed, so this was A fun mix of comic here, you have some nice detail here and the outcome of this one was pretty nifty, these comic entries get better with each new one and I found this to be a delight, so really nice work here on this submission and I hope to see more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
once again no changes are needed

~X~

[Trading Cards]

This comic series is pure awsome

I love this particular one because the color is really vibrant and a great little story here, no changes are really needed here, some really good details and effects but most of all you bring on some great comic frames with a twist of adventure This comic series is pure awsome A fine comic series here, some great frames of adventures and great characters aswell, always feeding off of eachother really makes this combo work well.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes are really needed here

~X~

[Kiss Creature]

Very nice

The backround could have more details and maybe even adding a frame or border would accent this piece even better, these styles of black and white are notbad and they present a classic form of beauty but anyways you have a nice sketch or black and white design here, and its always nice to see something as nice as this design and drawing come alive in just black and white.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
backround could have more details and maybe even adding a frame or border would accent this piece even better

~X~

[skeleton worm monster!!!]

Very detailed

So this was very detailed the shading alone was intense, I do wish there was more detail in the backround though, You have made some amazing things here very beautiful black and white drawing and or sketch here so nice work indeed, And just goes to show that sometimes we dont need color because black and white can show just as much detail as yours has here, so props to you on a fine piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish there was more detail in the backround

~X~

[Toph Heavy - Champion's Belt]

An aluring character design

Very nice black and white here maybe adding some color would really improve on this piece, some nice character work you have designed and a good sexy theme here really beautiful, you are very talented especially when it comes to a sexy character like this very nice line work and made it visually look smooth so nice job here I look forward to more sexy characters.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe adding some color would really improve on this piece

~X~

[Lazy Jinx]

Such beauty in this sexy character

I love the drawing itself but the backround could use some more detail and element about it, a nice and aluring element with some vivid visuals of a beautiful design of the character so really nice job here great detail nice character Such beauty in this sexy character you really have a nice form here of the character so really nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I love the drawing itself but the backround could use some more detail and element about it

~X~

[A Fantastic Dream]

A comic with passion

oh this one was a long one very nice indeed, anyways I have no changes or suggestions as this was pretty solid as is, Its always nice to see these web-comics but with this particular one you bring some nice passion to the front lines of this comic and its some nice scenes some entertaining action here too you really know how to make some nice comic work and you have done just that.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I have no changes or suggestions as this was pretty solid as is

~X~